what do you think of the following:?

Question

these words we wish to say
we can't, to great
they are but a mere memory
long forgotten
hold them now
for they are my heart
understand why
I cannot say how
I love you
thank you

Answer 1

Your telling someone you love them and have loved them and thanking them for being in your life. Nice sentiment , not too keen on the poetry though.

Answer 2

Sounds like a suicide note.

Are you thinking of ending your life? Trust me, it isn't the answer.

How do I know? I tried it, nearly succeeded. But that's not the point. The point is, there is always more than you know about that you affect.

I won't go into the "It's a Wonderful Life" thing. I'm just saying -- from experience (and I'm quite the impressive loser, you'd be amazed) -- killing yourself doesn't really solve anything. It only makes the life of those left behind more difficult.

Don't tell me there won't be anyone left behind because that's bull and you know it. At THE VERY LEAST there is the cop that finds your body and the paramedic that declares you dead. They will be affected for the rest of their lives and they never even knew you.

Answer 3

words that describe a past sweet soul, whom i will never again , no doubt speak to , nor see the beautifull spirit of her gorgeous wonderfull smile of her dear face.

I , even now, can not speak to her, for fear she would not listen.

or the greater fear, that she would not anymore care.

well written. as is all words , when spoken from the heart. True music of beauty.

Continue to live with truth, and your path will always show you its way.

Answer 4

sounds like your leaving someone, a lover of some sort. very interesting way of writing it...

anyways, i'm sorry for your loss, and just keep your chin up. take care.

Answer 5

I think that it's cute.