I know it isn't that good, but it was my first try. I am singing it for school a talent show. It took me two weeks to write, because I made so many changes. I play theguitar with it. The music sounds like a mixs between pop and rock. It is sung at a moderate-slow pace.
2006-12-21 12:44:00 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I am moving through the crowd
Trying to find myself
Feel like a guitar that's never played
Will someone strum away?
And I ask myself
Who do I wanna be?
Do I wanna throw away the key?
and invent a whole new me
and I tell myself
No One, No One
Don't wanna be
No One
But me
You are moving through the crowd
Trying to find yourself
Feelin' like a doll left on a shelf
Will someone take you down?
And you ask yourself
Who do I wanna be?
Do I wanna throw away the key?
and invent a whole new me
Gotta tell yourself
No One, No One
Don't wanna be
No One
But me
Your life plays out on the shadows of the wall
You turn the light on to erase it all
You wonder what it's like to not feel worthless
So open all the blinds and all the curtains
No One, No One
Don't wanna be
No One
But me....
We are moving through the crowd.....
2006-12-21 12:44:50 · update #1
um is this a joke? because that is a total copy of the Aly & AJ's song No One..sry but thats totally wrong to say their wonderful writing is yours. i can understand you basing a song on that cuz many people base works of art on other art..but this is total stealing
i cant believe these people who answered fell for that. People PLEASE this is not hers..this is from signed artists so it is pretty much copyrighted. trust me i have my sources
2006-12-21 13:12:59 · answer #1 · answered by Garbo's snowflake 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Okay...
its your first try, your off on a good start
use this(the talent show) to get your feet wet
keep a notepad and pen with you when u go everywhere
u can practice singing whenever, and the more you want it, the better u will become at it
however songs come when u least expect it
I use to have these inspirational songs whenever I was walking alone
strange I know, but there are more of people like me out there, who just dont get the song down
and the key is, you dont have to be an artist
you dont have to be in a band, you can just produce, or be a song writer, and still cover bills with it
even if that isnt what u want to do for a career, at least u will have it as to say a hobby
2006-12-21 20:48:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats sum really strong lyrics, considering its ur 1st time writing a song. i think u will do just fine at ur talent show! good luck =)
2006-12-21 20:48:23 · answer #3 · answered by K.A.R.A =] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that was really really good. e-mail me at softballcutiekc12@yahoo.com sometime we could work on a song together. I love to write songs too!!!
2006-12-21 20:50:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like the lyrics but it would be nice to hear the song being played
2006-12-21 20:46:32 · answer #5 · answered by p3ach3s117 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Very nice and good luck
2006-12-21 20:49:52 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok thanx
but srry, that is a total rip off off of some famous person's lyrics
2006-12-21 20:45:20 · answer #7 · answered by 2Cute2bTrue 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
you are on the road to fame try it on apollo dont give up you are soul searching your self
2006-12-21 20:52:45 · answer #8 · answered by linda t 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you did a great job
Happy holidays
2006-12-21 20:48:35 · answer #9 · answered by ♥LuV my preppyness♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds really good are you sure its pop rock because it sound like emo to me.
2006-12-21 20:47:44 · answer #10 · answered by EDDY 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋