The girl with the beautifully flowing tress darker than night itself.
2006-12-21 11:47:36 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
tress - a lock, curl or braid of hair
2006-12-21 11:56:35 · update #1
Well, it's not a sentence. It's a fragment... so to make it into a sentence, add a verb and maybe some more words to complete the thought. Also, it would be tresses, not tress.
The girl with the beautifully flowing tresses, darker than night itself, ... (what did the girl do?)
Example:
The girl with the beautifully flowing tresses, darker than night itself, raced to the bus stop to meet her friends.
The only other thing that's bothering me is the "darker than night itself" part. It's grammatically correct, but it seems unclear; it almost seems like the girl is darker than night itself, instead of her tresses. You could try rearranging the words or adding words to clarify.
Example:
The girl with the beautifully flowing tresses that were darker than night itself raced to the bus stop to meet her friends.
Though that sentence is a bit wordy. Keep editing it until you feel it's perfect. :)
2006-12-21 12:41:45 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ Dani 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO you need a verb. "The girl with the beautifully flowing tress [was,is] darker than itself.
2006-12-21 11:52:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. It is incomplete. Needs an action word at the end.
What about the girl with the beautiful flowing tress?? End your sentence
2006-12-21 11:50:40 · answer #3 · answered by karlee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The girl with the beautiful, flowing -----, darker than night itself.
2006-12-21 11:55:07 · answer #4 · answered by Shmily P 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Put a comma after "tress"? I think "dress" and you're set
2006-12-21 11:50:42 · answer #5 · answered by psychofish25 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it doesn't make sense. you could say "The girl with the beautiful, flowing trees, was darker than night itself" or something.
2006-12-21 11:49:57 · answer #6 · answered by chandar 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
maybe try this
The girl with the beautiful, flowing,darker than night itself, dress .
hmmm what do you think -_-
2006-12-21 11:56:24 · answer #7 · answered by teddy89 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautifully -> beautiful
Btw, I don't think this sentence make any sense
2006-12-21 11:48:52 · answer #8 · answered by Oh Dee! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes sir<<<<< english major
2006-12-21 11:49:22 · answer #9 · answered by krizz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um no was or did or said ect. therefore it was not correct all you did was expand the noun no verb : )
2006-12-21 11:56:17 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋