ok here is my new poem i was going to give it to my mom for christmas to show how much she means to me, and i want to know if anyone likes it or just give me feedback
2006-12-21 08:31:41 · 17 answers · asked by Leo 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
here is the poem i was talking about
Love
Love is like a lump of gold,
Hard to get, and hard to hold.
Of all the mom's I've ever met,
You're the one I can't forget.
I do believe that God above,
Created you for me to love.
He chose you from all the rest,
Because he knew I would love you best.
2006-12-21 08:32:50 · update #1
yeah i have another one if u guys wanna hear it ? im 17 by the way , and i bored so if anyone wants to chat im open lol
2006-12-21 08:43:39 · update #2
that is really good. I expecially like the 1st 2 lines.
2006-12-22 11:30:34 · answer #1 · answered by Heyhey 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, especially the ending
2006-12-21 18:05:25 · answer #2 · answered by Kat 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey that's good.An aspiring poet among us.She will love it.
2006-12-21 16:41:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice and simply stated!!! She'll love it
2006-12-21 16:34:48 · answer #4 · answered by angeleyes_13180 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet...good peomes for mothers day
2006-12-21 16:37:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
great job! i love writing poems and this is pretty good. i think she'll like it!
2006-12-21 16:38:17 · answer #6 · answered by tigerlilly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job Leo! Your mom is sure to adore it...
2006-12-21 16:35:43 · answer #7 · answered by psych student 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep going!
2006-12-21 16:40:05 · answer #8 · answered by Robert W 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How lovely and well wrote.
2006-12-21 16:41:07 · answer #9 · answered by kitzy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ohhhhhhhh, that's so sweet! Your mom will LOVE it!!!
2006-12-21 16:39:50 · answer #10 · answered by Be Still and know He's God 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋