You would be better off in asking for a website review when your website is completed. It's not a good idea to put a website up with so many pages unfinished yet. If this is your first attempt, I can understand how you might want opinions, however, it looks too unfinished.
But if you still want a review, here goes:
1. Visually your website is not very appealing and looks incomplete the way it is. There are no colors or anything to grab your viewer's attention....no headline, etc. The graphic header at the top is ok, except the graphic of MicroSoft's little window is copyrighted and you probably shouldn't be using it.
2. The whole thing should be centered, or made to take up the whole window (liquid layout) without so much white space on the right.
3. Your navigation area at the top needs improvement.
3. There is no content, only links to unfinished pages.
Upon looking at your code, and validating it with the W3C, (http://validator.w3.org/) you came up with 11 errors. You might want to correct these.
1. There is no DocType, or the one you have there isn't correct. It's missing something. Check this out for the recommended DTDs to use.http://www.w3.org/QA/2002/04/valid-dtd-list.html
2. Your CSS coding should be in a separate file and called from the HTML doc.
Sample:
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