Which one do you like better?
•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school, that does not make it right.
•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school, it does not make it right.
•The widespread prevalence of procrastination in every single school does not make it right.
•Just because procrastination happens every day in every school, that does not make it right.
•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school this does not make it right.
2006-12-21 03:13:23 · 8 answers · asked by I have the Joy of the Lord! 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
•Although procrastination is common in every school, it should not be considered a good habit to have.
2006-12-21 03:26:58 · update #1
4. Just because procrastination happens every day in every school, that does not make it right.
'Just because' is a better fit here than 'Even though', which rules out 1, 2 and 5. 'Prevalence of procrastination' sounds awkward (almost like a tongue twister) which rules out 3.
2006-12-21 03:25:31 · answer #1 · answered by Groucho Returns 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The widespread prevalence of procrastination in every single school does not make it right.
2006-12-21 11:21:34 · answer #2 · answered by ~*The Show Must Go On*~ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Just because procrastination happens every day in every school, that does not make it right.
You don't need to say "every single".
2006-12-21 11:21:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yuck. I don't like any of them. How about:
Though procrastination is common in any school, this does not make it right.
2006-12-21 11:22:35 · answer #4 · answered by Faustus 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like the last one and the first one. This and that are better referants than it.
Also, the repetition of every gives emphasis.
2006-12-21 11:23:02 · answer #5 · answered by xayuq 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"Just because procrastination. . . . . ."
That one.
but that's just my opinion
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2006-12-21 16:13:59 · answer #6 · answered by spongebob11_19 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#3 ...but that's just my opinion
2006-12-21 11:22:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
the second sentence you have you
2006-12-21 11:21:08 · answer #8 · answered by MRS DEE 2 U 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋