Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school that does not make it right.
Is it a word fragment? How can I improve it?
2006-12-21 02:50:33 · 8 answers · asked by I have the Joy of the Lord! 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
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•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school, that does not make it right.
•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school, it does not make it right.
•The widespread prevalence of procrastination in every single school does not make it right.
•Just because procrastination happens every day in every school, that does not make it right.
2006-12-21 03:08:54 · update #1
•Even though procrastination happens every single day in every single school this does not make it right.
2006-12-21 03:11:04 · update #2
It is a fragment because the thought is not complete. What does it not make right. Be careful of using pronouns without an antecedent to clarify. Don't forget to use a comma after school.
2006-12-21 03:00:51 · answer #1 · answered by LOLO W 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's a fragment, but you're close.
I'd write something like:
Although procrastination is common in every school, it should not be considered a good habit to have.
2006-12-21 03:13:16 · answer #2 · answered by sum4182girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The widespread prevalence of procrastination in every single school does not make it right.
2006-12-21 02:57:13 · answer #3 · answered by Nirajan R 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Well.... let me see......leave out preposistions and the subordinate clause then........you have: Even though procrastination happens every single day.
Yes it is a fragment. Try making it into two or three sentences because there is no way to work with that sentence. I already tried.
2006-12-21 02:56:40 · answer #4 · answered by Lynne 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It is not a fragment, but it is an incorrect sentence structure. Put a comma after 'school' and this will correct the structure and eliminate the problem.
2006-12-21 02:58:46 · answer #5 · answered by cuban friend 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
possibly my grammar is undesirable right this moment, yet that doesn't look a sentence fragment. possibly it in basic terms needs you to assert 5905 what, like 5905 Wilshire street because of the fact it does not know 5905 as a noun. in specific circumstances be conscious in basic terms gets overly nit-picky.
2016-12-11 13:37:38 · answer #6 · answered by vasim 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about................
Although procrastination takes place every day in most schools, it does not make it right.
2006-12-21 02:59:28 · answer #7 · answered by precious02k 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Place a comma in front of the word school; this should correct the issue.
2006-12-21 02:55:28 · answer #8 · answered by jake_deyo 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋