Is this a good poem?

Question

(Metamorphosis/ Emotions transform into matter)
Everytime it starts so pleasant,
Hand shakes and nodding heads,
Exchange of meaningless presents,
Wanting everyone to fall in line,
To another's independence.
Disagreement cause emotions,
To undergo a metamorphosis.
Respect to tolerance, anger to hatred,
Some by accident, other,
Done on purpose,
Some in ignorence,
Others meant to be deviant,
Agreement, to maybes,
To disagreement,
Prideful differance,
Result in signatures,for restrictions
Over food, weapons, and funds,
Heated words morph into guns,
Passed to Generals to Majors,
Everything passed down to pawns,
Who's mind are broken,
Bent then remolded,
Believing who is weak,
And who is strong.
Love changes to song, dance, and hugs,
Hate twists from words, to fist, to guns.
The emotions that rule our lives,
Are the monuments left behind,
To be observed by our sons.

Answer 1

Very deep poem ! Epitomises the varaince in our human emotions as well as the conformity to authority - right and wrong. Don't stop writing...

Answer 2

In my opinion, no. It's too literal. The words used don't reflect the transformation they're describing. The grammar is bad; and not in a creative way.

A poem is more than a paragraph with bizarre line breaks and rhymes.

Answer 3

I really like it! Nice job!

Answer 4

It is not bad.