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Trying to stay alive.

here is what its about
6 friends head off on a roadtrip when there van breaks down, now they see a cabin and they head toward it, and a pyscho takes them hostage in the cabin? WHAT DO YOU THINK???!!!

2006-12-19 15:23:15 · 11 answers · asked by XxNeaNeaxX 2 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

11 answers

Needs more zazz. How about, "Walden II:the Revenge" or "Roadtrap" or "When Nature Calls" no make that "When Nature Callz". "Friday the 13th part XII", "Cabin Fever", "Cabin Cleaver", "My Summer Vacation", No, no, I got it "My Summer Slay-cation". Just couldn't resist that one.

Ok, that's enough crap. Choose one or start spit-balling yourself, but don't go with "Trying to Stay Alive". Not punchy enough.

2006-12-19 16:49:37 · answer #1 · answered by Underground Man 6 · 0 0

WOW is that boring. It's been done a million times (Texas Chainsaw Massacre, Cabin Fever, House of a 1000 Corpses, Friday the 13th). Besides, the whole teenager in a cabin cliche peeked with The Evil Dead series, so why compete? Write something original

2006-12-20 01:32:54 · answer #2 · answered by Russell QQ 4 · 0 0

Need a new title..more catching..sounds too much like the movie John Travolta was in...Pick an element from the story and use it..whether its part of the opening sentence or last..
Also in your ideas use a thesaurus..it helps..

2006-12-19 23:27:40 · answer #3 · answered by LostInTheCrowd 2 · 0 0

The title is too weak. Does not indicate much about the plot. What happens next in yr plot? Maybe the title should have somrthing to with what happens next

2006-12-20 01:52:24 · answer #4 · answered by Vaakshri 2 · 0 0

Too long. Stay Alive. Alive.

2006-12-19 23:31:11 · answer #5 · answered by felixtricks 3 · 0 0

The title is bad and the story is cliche. Try again.

2006-12-20 00:05:03 · answer #6 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0 0

How about just Roadtrip, unless it has already been taken.

2006-12-19 23:31:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

. . .then what happens next. Do they eventually escape or? stay alive how? Reminds me of the "Jason" Frid.13th movie

2006-12-19 23:45:50 · answer #8 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

Sorry, but it's not really a very catchy title. Needs something more edgy.

2006-12-19 23:28:45 · answer #9 · answered by MissE 3 · 0 0

Its been done a million times

2006-12-19 23:25:27 · answer #10 · answered by bubbles 1 · 1 0

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