Could someone write me a poem about a specific classroom (cafeteria, english, etc.) and/or a random poem w/ illustration?
(10+ lines)
it would be much appreciated, I'm an awful poet
2006-12-19 01:01:46 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The hallways were noisy will all kinds of sounds
As Daniel and Eric busted off rounds
Run for lives! The students did shout
As all inside tried to get out
Some were lucky, while others were not
When all said and done it was 27 they shot
2 dozen wounded, another 12 dead
And even a teacher to death he bled
In the library they made their last stand
And chose at that time to die by their own hand
And all this horror and madness you’ll find,..
At the lovely school in Colorado called Columbine
Thats right,.. bring on the hatemail and thumbs downs!!!
2006-12-19 03:26:22 · answer #1 · answered by Z 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The room is awful hot
My science teacher is mixing something in a pot
I wait for the bell to ring
Someone in the back starts to sing
That teacher looks up
and puts down a cup
"Who was that singing?"
I couldn't for that ringing
"Was it you Sarah?"
My heart jumped "it wasn't me it was Clara!"
There was an eerie silence as she walk past desk
I was so frightened my heart pounded in my chest.
But just then I hear the bell!
Everybody started to yell
It was time for lunch
I wanted to munch.
Is that good? I cannot write poems for the live of me! But I hope it helps!
2006-12-19 09:52:18 · answer #2 · answered by katlover118 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try doing this:
The classroom is bright and hot,
Every day I sit here and fly sighing silent words.
My life is measured in these empty rooms
And minds sleepy with old tired dreams.
Then try experimenting like this:
The classroom bright, hot.
Here fly silent sighing words.
Life measured in empty rooms
Minds sleepy; old tired dreams.
Over to you!
2006-12-19 09:17:32 · answer #3 · answered by darestobelieve 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Z's poem was awesome.
Just remember one thing though, your poem doesn't have to rhyme. Most people are to concerned with rhyming and ruin their peoms in the process. Rhyming is almost frowned upon these days, so try to avoid it if you can.
2006-12-19 16:32:45 · answer #4 · answered by BonerBob 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
We really shouldn't be doing the work for you. Just right what you feel, and if you like that class or room!
Oklahoma
Good Luck
2006-12-19 10:09:11 · answer #5 · answered by x0xDrumMajorx0x 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are not an awful poet. you just need more practice!
you are not an awful artist. you just need more practice!
2006-12-19 09:11:00 · answer #6 · answered by gggjoob 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well Z quite the peot....
lol,... well,.. its nice,....
rhythms
2006-12-19 13:47:32 · answer #7 · answered by Khepri 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋