our teacher assigned us to make a composition about "THE PEOPLE U HATE MOST" and i hate people hu are judgemental but i cant write the things on my thought! geeessshh this is so hard for me.. pls. help!! give me ideas and write a composition for me pls whch consist of 3paragraph (introduction, body, conclusion) pls. i really need a hand..
2006-12-19 00:09:58 · 8 answers · asked by _-rei-_ 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
This question is funny like heck, and as the same time it makes me feel sad. Because the way you asked and the way you wrote your question, it is looking all wrong to me.
English is my second language. It is hard enough to learn English in the correct way, I have to learn how to avoid someone like you who wrote the English for me to read. I think the best advise to you is, you need to drop out from this class. Because your racking of idea to write what you believe in the first place, and your grammatical need to be taught; you do not need to continue in this class.
If this English class is too much for you, or it is over your head then you need to withdraw from this class and go back to start from the beginning. You do not need to stay in the class that you have to write any essay yet. You might want to start with the English reading, and the class that you could learn how to write the correct grammar. This way you could learn how to write English better.
Someday you might be a successful person for something. Right now you still learning, you can’t get anyone to look up at you with your essay. Because you have no idea yet of knowing yourself what you are believing in, or you are talking about; it would be your downfall of success in life. Even though, I am not that good with English either, but I could tell that your writing is desperately need to be editing. There is grammatical errors through out your writing. Why would you want to wrote the wrong English when you need to learn how to write an essay for? After all English and Math are the two important classes. They work together for the foundation of all your educations. Even if you are doing poor in English, but good in Math; you would still get around 50% of what you could do.
Sometime we could try to push ourselves a little closer to safety even though we were lacking of preparation that might led to our down fall. We only look at to our mistake, and can learn by it. To prepare for this English class, it is importance for you to know the English base. Hope you doing well in Math and the other classes.
There were times in my life when I missed doing something important. Sometime the thing I missed, it might mean to be missed. Sometime there were the things I missed doing, it ended up being costly to my success in life. To be successful in life, sometime we want to override the mistake and failure by looking at our succeed from the top of the mountain.
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2006-12-19 02:44:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would suggest having a couple. Judgemental and superficial for instance. Make a list for yourself of why you don't like judgemental people. Come up with a list of concrete reasons why judgemental people get your goat. Such as...judgemental people are irritating because no matter what you do their first opinion of you are the ones they stick to. Superficial people are a pain because you never really know what they are thinking they are simply telling you what they think you need to know.
Use the introduction to list why you don't like the people you don't like. Use the body to illustrate more fully the points you made in the introductory paragraph. Use an instance from real life that illustrates the points you made. Then in the conclusion sum up what you said in the first paragraph and then come up with some way that judgemental people might change or improve so the whole composition doesn't sound like you're whining.
Happy writing!!! Tip on writing. Just let it flow. Write WAY too much and then edit the heck out of it, rearrange it and make it into a pleasing format.
2006-12-19 00:23:58 · answer #2 · answered by dakirk123 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A TV.Show, that document's how Naive the American people are to the actual Brutal Hatred of certain Faction's in the World that would do absolutely any thing to destroy America, or any Nation, with Religious Freedom~! 2. A show, on the "Planet" and The Effects of Global Warming, with the possibility of rising sea's potentially increaslingly strong storms, decreasing land masses, whether humanity could survive!
2016-03-29 00:07:59 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Introduction: identify the group or people you hate the most and hint at why. Body: provide specific reasons and examples of why they are worthy of your hate. Perhaps reference media or historical accounts of their actions. Conclusion: proivde a summary and whether you will continue to hate or can you or the subject be redeemed!
Or you could develop the premise that you don't hate anyone, that hate is a very strong emotion to not be used lightly, and why no one should really hate without extreme justification.
2006-12-19 00:24:15 · answer #4 · answered by jack w 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How can you sit there and ask someone to do your homework? Is it hard or are you just lazy? How does that benefit you? Honestly, grow up. If the assignment is hard, do what you can and hand it in. Never ask someone to do it for you because you're cheating yourself out of a great learning experience.
2006-12-19 00:18:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For your intro you could find a song about judging people or about hating people. Then movon to the body. Then could like something about people who are alway judging people. (wouldn't use any names) Like Simon (From American Idol). Or you could do someone like Hitler or Andrew Jackson! Hope my suggestions helped!
2006-12-19 02:00:58 · answer #6 · answered by katlover118 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You can write about how much you hate the people on Yahoo because they won't do your homework for you.
2006-12-19 00:31:09 · answer #7 · answered by Determinate 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
YOU definetely can write the things on your mind. Go for it. It is all opinianated so no one can think your stupid.
Write whatever pleases you....
IT is your opinion. I cant tell you what your opinion is.
2006-12-19 00:23:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋