I search for meaning far & wide
Im coming apart from the inside
Im lonely, paranoid, sad & frustrated
If only i could get motivated
I no not how to take control
So much drama & rigmarole
If only i could find a way
To rise above this all, one day
2006-12-18 18:53:32 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's beautiful.
It describe the feeling of helplessness & confusion so well.
I hope I intrepreted it correctly though.
2006-12-18 18:56:33 · answer #1 · answered by Diamond 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
1. It looks like the beginning of a poem or like a prayer, only that you don't pray. I like it, but I cannot say that you'll get a Nobel for this.
2. You should really do something about your spelling and your grammar if you want to be published, one day.
I search for meaning far & wide
I'm coming apart from the inside
I'm lonely, paranoid, sad & frustrated
If only I could get motivated
I know not how to take control
So much drama & rigmarole
If only I could find a way
To rise above these all, one day
2006-12-19 03:05:47 · answer #2 · answered by mrquestion 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, a little depressing but not bad. Here's one of my little depressed poems. Have a great day and may the sun shine bright tomorrow.
GAME OF LIFE
The tireless games of every day life
are starting to bore me now
The game of life that we all play
has been thrown to the other side
We take another punt and we take another bet
cause the world is getting us down
It looks hopeful for a while but then alas
the world has won hands down
2006-12-19 05:52:39 · answer #3 · answered by epod 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dude! All you need to do is find a couple of buddies, a guitar, a keyboard and some drums and you're all set to become rich!
2006-12-19 02:58:26 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow that is good sounds about how life can get for the most of us but dont worry things get better
2006-12-19 02:55:43 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
stop whinin' and cryin' get up off your a.s.s. and start tryin'. though things may be overwhelming and times awful rough. there's nothing you can't do if you want it enough. so dig in your hells and start fightin' back. grab that run of bad luck and twist it till it cracks!
2006-12-19 02:58:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats pretty good dude
2006-12-19 02:54:35 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
and U will. that was nice. sounds like ur going through alot. turn to sum1 that you can talk to, it does help. don't give up, be strong.
2006-12-19 02:57:06 · answer #8 · answered by Luv J 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good job.
2006-12-19 03:00:34 · answer #9 · answered by Obsidian © 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-12-19 02:59:53 · answer #10 · answered by Mag 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋