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I am a budding writer. I started writing about a story idea that seemed very promising then got totally and completely stuck. My story is a satire about a near future academy which –thanks to a revolutionary surveillance technology-is capable of studying sentient civilizations on distant planets. I created 3 interesting characters(religious female scholar, haughty male scientist, creative male pacifist with whole the religious scholar is in love) and I described the academy, the technology, a few interesting lessons gained from studying other civs, and then I'm out of fuel, unable to invent the struggle necessary to keep all stories interesting. Do you have any suggestions to keep my story going on?Some spice, some struggle or problem that needs to be resolved and gets the reader involved?

2006-12-17 23:25:20 · 4 answers · asked by lagondapaolini 1 in Social Science Psychology

4 answers

HELLooo like ever heard of the BAD GUY the guy who actually creates a story and has too die in the last

2006-12-17 23:29:26 · answer #1 · answered by nocturnal fear 1 · 0 0

we received great shots of the distant planet spelnep hidden beyond the grax solar system 6,000,000 light years away from home, we came across a precious resource that was once mined by the spelnepians, "haughty male scientists says" hmmm interesting! it seems that they where using this type of fuel for large reactors! "the female blurts out" Lets get on the wire with jay-hote of the notational empire of space travel explorations of the unis Galaxy. "male pacifist" ugh under his breath, thinking to himself. she just wants to go see her old lover. she just still might like him..........ummm i guess turn it into a love story that turns out for the better in the end. during this time go into how the scholar fights through emotional struggles with the ex-lover, and how its in his interest to win her back by his role in society, thinking that proprietary rules over all. and maybe add in a twist, where the haughty scientist trys to go behind thier backs and sell the coordinates to this undiscovered ancient civilization. which through emotional struggle and bravery of the scholar and the skepticism of the jealous lover they pull through, mine the ancient fuel, and maybe the pacifist gets to become the head of the empire after they have discovered that the ex lover was behind everything even trying to make deals with the scientist to sabotage the mission...and they all live happily ever after

2006-12-18 00:04:19 · answer #2 · answered by stickyn1 2 · 0 0

Have them disagree on what some finding means for each of their theories. They all grow more polarized against each other. But then they discover that the government or corporate funding group thinks the information is too dangerous because of what they think it will do to people's beliefs. Have the trio come together to stave off the corruption and assassins until they realize that they all think the truth should come out and people should decide what to make of it themselves.

2006-12-18 08:23:52 · answer #3 · answered by Avalon 4 · 0 0

Write that a man named George Bush came to that planet and decided to remove all their leaders and change their government.

2006-12-17 23:34:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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