an you check my translation?

Question

hi! I traslated into English some sentences from a cover letter. can you check it, suggest your idea and correct the mistakes. thanks a lot

1. My experience to date made me realize the fact that I get a lot of satisfaction from this kind of job.
I would like to develop in this field and become better and better specialist in this field.

2. This position would be a very important step in my professional career and would give me new possibilities of development.
3. I am convinced that my work in xxx will be advantageous for both of the Parties.
4.For me the xx Company is a symbol of the company which guarantees workers professional development and new challenges.
5. The possibility to work in a company with such a well-deserved position on the market would be an advantageous step in my professional career.

Answer 1

1. My experience to date has made me realize that I get a lot of satisfaction from this type of job.
I would like to develop in this field and become a much better specialist in this area.

2. This position would be a very important step in my professional career and would give me new development possibilities.
3. I am certain that my work in xxx will be advantageous to both of us.
4. To me, the xx Company is symbolic of the type of company that is interested in the professional development of its employees, and provides new challenges for those employees.
5. The possibility to work in a company with such a well-deserved position on the market would be an advantageous step in my professional career.

Answer 2

Here you go:

1. My experience to date, made me realize the fact that I get great satisfaction from this kind of job.
I would like to develop in this field and become better as a specialist in this field.

2. This position would be a very important step in my professional career and would give me new possibilities of development.
3. I am convinced that my work in xxx will be advantageous for both of our Parties.
4.For me the xx Company is a symbol of a company which guarantees workers, professional development and new challenges.
5. The possibility to work in a company with such a well-deserved position on the market would be a prosperous step in my professional career.

Just a few slight modifications, well done! :D

Answer 3

Hi, I translated into English some sentences from a cover letter.(Two spaces after a full stop) Can you check it, suggest your idea and correct the mistakes. Thanks a lot.

1. My experience to date (has) made me realise that I gain a lot of satisfaction from this job. I would like to like to develop my skills and become more highly specialised in this field of work.

2. I consider that this position would be a very important step in my professional career and could teach me even more skills I would need to further my prospects in my future career.

3. I am convinced that my work would be mutually (it means to all concerned) advantageous.

4. To me, your company has a fantastic reputation for ensuring its workers experience professional development and new challenges.

5. The chance to work within a a company with such a well-deserved position and reputation in the marketplace would be a wonderful place to take the next step in my career.

I think you may need to think about what the job entails more, for example exactly what skills are you expecting to use? Try and be specific about what skills you have as the letter does seem slightly repetitive with the same point being made time and again. Even though I have tried to make it sound more varied in the use of language, some points are very similar in meaning... Good luck with your application.

Answer 4

I have altered your sentences a little, but retained the meaning. There is an element of repetition, and personally, I wouldn't number those points - less is more. Bullet points are good - but these sentences are a bit long for bullet points. Good luck to you in your application.

If the job is in the UK, use specialise not specialize, which is an US spelling - same with realise if you wish to use that word.

1. My experience to date has made me aware that this type of work gives me great satisfaction.
I wish to specialise in this field, developing the skills I already have.
2. Obtaining this position would be a very important step in my professional career enabling me to hone my skills further.
3. I am convinced that my work in xxx will be advantageous for both parties involved.
4. In my opinion, xx Company is an employer that nurtures employees’ professional development by providing challenges.
5. Working with a company such as yours, with such a well-deserved position on the market, would be an advantageous step in my professional career.

Answer 5

1. My experience is I get alot of satisfaction from this work.
I am keen to advance in this field.
2 This position would be a great advancement to my career and would enable me to develop further.
3 I am sure this appointment will be in our mutual interest.
4 I feel xx Company is a company which guarantees workers professional development and new challenges.
5 The possibility of employment in such a respected company would be a forward step in my professional career.

Answer 6

overall not bad, but here are some suggestions:
1. first sentence fine - 2nd sentence - "I want to further develop my skills in this space, and eventually specialize in this field."

2. "This position would be a very important step in my professional career and would help me further my development." (be careful putting this in a cover letter - sounds very one sided, you should focus more on question #3 which is more mutually benefical to both parties)

3. Sounds good - but stress WHY you think it would be advantageous to both parties.

4. "XX Company is known for providing challenging opportunities and professional growth and development for it's employees."

5. Again, sounds fine, but they don't care why it's advantageous for you, they will want to know why it's advantageous for them as well.

GOOD LUCK!!

Answer 7

It seems basic. Like bad english. Try speaking to someone who speaks the language your trying to get.

Nothing is worse when a very basic translation gets mixed up and it looks stupid.

That to me when I read it looks like bad english. If I was an employer and seen that letter I would not be impressed.

Sorry, but honest opinion.

Answer 8

its ok, but you may have gone a bit far, seems to me that your selling your self a bit to much................GOOD LUCK