Can anybody help me with my English (part 4)?

Question

Mr./s

Oath of working safety (My vow for this year)

I promise always work keeping safety regulations, avoiding the following dangerous behaviors.

1.I will not clean or fix machines while they are running.
2.In case of accidents, I will warn other workers.
3.I will be careful when driving a forklift truck, in order to prevent accidents.
4.I will pay enough attention when driving to work, trying to avoid car accidents.
5.As tin is as dangerous as edged tools, I will be careful not touching it directly.
6.I will keep strictly the rule of greeting others.

(Period)January 1st , 2007 ～ December 31st , 2007

Year Month Day


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Answer 1

Part 4 seems fine but how come you're writing this?! I never heard about anybody else writing such a letter. Maybe we live more freely in Canada (Quebec) ...