Okay posted some different lyrics so if you read that and replyed then you know..if you didnt then go read what that one says and you will know more abt the music and the background and stuff btw tell me if you like those lyrics too- it is .. These lyrics i wrote rate them please..1 to 10.. btw its rock so if you dont like rock music ya kno?.....okay so this is a different song i wrote tell me if you like it honestly
make your life better
dont say nothins worse
cause you wont stand at the alter
unless you forse someone else
i see you trailin my back now
but i dont really care
its the thrill of this pack now
thats gonna be hell
oh and one by one
your comin
too bad your not worth a dam.n(let me go)
and a-nother
pityless fortune
you've left me again
your hellbent for rotting
dont feel sorry for you
even thought i've forgotten
what it feels like to move
but im comin back!
as a bird in this wolf scrap
they say that i'm clean
but they dont really know that
one by one
your comin
too bad your not wortha dam.n (let me go)
and a-nother
pityless fortune
you've left me again
(the music and beat kinda changes here, im just trying to
help you here it in your head)
mother jails not for me
father aint too happy
it was worth it no lie
trust i twisted the knife
swear it wont happen again
since im already dead!
cause its true, true, true
you aint wortha dime
dont go there
its bigger than you think
(music and beat changes back here)
one by one
your comin
too bad your not worth a dam.n (let me go)
and a-nother
pitless fortune
you've left me again (with these stains on my hands!)
the beat changed well because...well i would have to expain
the WHOLE song to tell you why, so if you really understand
then you know why it changes..but if you dont then if you really want
me to explain it then just say and i will post it in a different question...
2006-12-17 18:45:28 · 5 answers · asked by i-canstandmyown-ground 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
thanks for your honesty dude...but obviously you do not understand rock or this song....but really i respect your honesty
2006-12-17 18:56:53 · update #1
the lyrics do not make sense to me either however...lyrics making sense are not all that important if the music sounds good coz people aren't going to care so much about lyrics if it is going to be a great sounding rock song.
2006-12-17 19:03:11 · answer #1 · answered by kicking_back 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I wager it will depend on what you imply by way of "message". I like songs that inform a tale that you simply piece in combination over time and takes on new that means as you age and mature. Some songs like "Blinded by way of the sunshine" or "Hotel California" are classics that make you surprise approximately the author and what variety of 'have an effect on' brought about the tune. Other songs furnish a few best instrumental paintings with none lyrics in any respect like "Frankenstein" But I wager I nonetheless like being within the crowd at a rock-fest and making a song at the side of the band climate or no longer the phrases make experience on the time, it nonetheless rocks!
2016-09-03 14:44:57 · answer #2 · answered by buch 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice try. But I don't think your ready. Well the lyrics don't make sense and they're stupid. It all talks about them. And I can't find this rock. If you sang this on Australian Idol you will recieve bad comments from the judges. And my ratings from 1-10. A poorly 2. Better luck next time.
2006-12-17 18:52:32 · answer #3 · answered by Lance 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a great song. I would love to actually hear it with the music. Great job!
2006-12-17 18:47:56 · answer #4 · answered by california girl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow very good definitely 10
2006-12-17 18:48:42 · answer #5 · answered by fritos_are_hott 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋