"Locked Door"
Every day I hide
Behind a diamond mask
"Something hard," I asked
So no one sees inside
Why do I need it?
The answer's very clear
My best friend said a bit
More than I could bear
Chorus:
What did I do?
How did I hurt you?
I thought life was just the same as before
And then here you came slamming your door
And locking it good
(I knew you would)
So I couldn't get in
To your other world
My best friend was gone
I couldn't go on
Standing here alone
Like forgotten stones
I'm waiting in the dark
for another life to start
My parents said, "Just give it time"
(Shoot, I can't think of another rhyme)
Chorus
To read the rest of the lyrics, go to the question "Feedback for my song lyrics (Part 2)?" It's supposed to be one song, but it's too long for this Details section. Please give me some comments, and thanks!
2006-12-17 11:56:09 · 3 answers · asked by whatevbookwrm687 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it's good, but to be honest, the chorus needs work
2006-12-17 12:04:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, it needs some work. The lyrics are all over the place and don't make sense most of the time. It seems like something 4th grade girls might listen to, but not much else. Nice try though...
2006-12-17 12:04:57 · answer #2 · answered by Kelly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
gay......yeah
2006-12-17 11:59:07 · answer #3 · answered by ass 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋