There must be lights burning brighter somewhere
Got to be birds flying higher in a sky more blue
If I can dream of a better land
Where all my brothers walk hand in hand
Tell me why, oh why, oh why can't my dream come true
There must be peace and understanding sometime
Strong winds of promise that will blow away
All the doubt and fear
If I can dream of a warmer sun
Where hope keeps shining on everyone
Tell me why, oh why, oh why won't that sun appear
2006-12-17 06:43:34 · 14 answers · asked by RNM 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Excellent. The rest as following,
We're lost in a cloud
With too much rain
We're trapped in a world
That's troubled with pain
But as long as a man
Has the strength to dream
He can redeem his soul and fly
Deep in my heart there's a trembling question
Still I am sure that the answer gonna come somehow
Out there in the dark, there's a beckoning candle
And while I can think, while I can talk
While I can stand, while I can walk
While I can dream, please let my dream
Come true, right now
Let it come true right now
Oh yeah
2006-12-17 06:53:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Amazing
2006-12-17 14:47:34 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very thought provoking.. Almost like a song.
Just needs one more section to make it complete. You have covered, wind, sun, sky, ...try going on to describe the earth.
It is beautiful
2006-12-17 14:49:17 · answer #3 · answered by kishoti 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Amazing.
2006-12-17 15:55:24 · answer #4 · answered by Deleted 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2006-12-17 14:47:28 · answer #5 · answered by TINYTI 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That is really good and could be made into a really nice song. Did you write it?
2006-12-17 14:46:08 · answer #6 · answered by alternativepunk 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it!! Good job. You have a lot of talent.
2006-12-17 14:48:23 · answer #7 · answered by Peaches27 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tis good.
Credit where credit's due
2006-12-17 14:47:02 · answer #8 · answered by Oeuf 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes it's good. I like it
2006-12-17 16:22:12 · answer #9 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's very good!
2006-12-17 14:48:58 · answer #10 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋