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Question

i need to write a conclusion to my essay on : Show how Shakespeare varies Capulet’s language to convey his changing attitude towards Juliet in the course of the play. Refer to the following three scenes: act 1 scene 2, act 3 scenes 5 and act 4 scenes 5.

i have written :Shakespeare has changed Capulet’s attitude towards Juliet in act 1 scene 2, act 3 scenes 5 and act 4 scenes 5 to create tension throughout the play.

but it doesnt seem enough....help me!!!!

Answer 1

wow, i am going a logn way back here.. but eng lit was always my forte, and i had a good teacher and i haev a good memory (and love shakepspeare- i know! im weird lol) sooo... from what i remember..

Shakespeare makes juliets lines become more gradually more shorter and with more slang in towards the end to her "death" scene.
This is usedd by shakespeare to convey and suggest to us the irrationality of her actions. As Juliets line getmore shorter, we read the tempo as more rapid and unintelligable to represent her frame ofmind- of which is also very much in an unstable and rapid state.

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Answer 2

A conclusion, huh? Have you tried putting your opinion about the play? For example, have you said how dramatic the fact is that Romeo and Juliet actually gave up their lives for one another? Just to be with each other. Have you mentioned anything about the servants in act one scene one? How they behave and use bawdy humor, sexual innuendo? Have you mentioned that the feud went actually down the social scale, all the way down to the servants?

Answer 3

why don't you reiterate some of the evidence you have mentioned in your essay...please, if you're old enough to be reading Romeo and Juliet and competant enough to write an analysis, you can do a decent conclusion.
Have faith!

Answer 4

have you tried looking at the spark notes on romeo and juliet? it gives a scene by scene summary and analysis so it may help you.