I'm divinely blessed and infinitely so,
all derisive jests are indellible,
poetic art breaks, new phoenix rise up aglow,
inspired by my fears I exhale my own soul
2006-12-16 21:22:44 · 7 answers · asked by Twinki 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You kinda need to elaborate on the "divinely blessed" bit. Maybe add another line to explain that or explain it in another part of the song. As it is it kinda makes no sense.
also, it sounds a little weird talking about a "new phoenix" because the whole idea of the phoenix is that is rises from it's own ashes, Nothing new there.
But overall they're not at all bad. I'd say 7 out of 10.
I was wondering what kind of music these are for. good luck :)
2006-12-16 21:44:29 · answer #1 · answered by Z, unnecessary letter 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you appear to have been the object of a lot of unwanted attention that has hurt you deeply, with the strength you have left you have managed to pull your self up enough to exhale the hurt and the bad feelings and some of the ghosts. Despite this you have faith in hope and plenty of that Just my interpretation, i find it poetic and with some meaning to it, I like it
2006-12-17 05:38:28 · answer #2 · answered by kris6297 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It does not make any sense and does not appear to be that harmonic with the scale. Not quite grammy material. =<)
2006-12-17 05:44:55 · answer #3 · answered by Sir Grandmaster Adler von Chase 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yo !! good one
It has a deep meaning in itself
Did you write it by yourself??
i must appriciate :)
2006-12-17 05:32:45 · answer #4 · answered by shon 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
somewhat meaningless.. loose the rhyme a bit..
2006-12-17 05:27:05 · answer #5 · answered by Zenithia Victora 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, 3/5
2006-12-17 05:25:26 · answer #6 · answered by Paula 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like em' alot.
2006-12-17 05:25:40 · answer #7 · answered by Daniel S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋