ok so heres what i have, any feedback would be great.
Dear Mom,
There are no words to describe how much I love you. You are the best mother anyone could ever ask for, not only that but a friend as well. I know I can always count on you to be there for me. You are the most thoughtful, honest, caring person. You are one of a kind, and I only hope to grow up to be half of the wonderful woman you are.
Love your daughter
i hope i dont come off sounding like a hallmark employee
2006-12-16 19:16:38 · 9 answers · asked by icup 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
I applaud your intentions. As to your note itself, it is one chliche after another from begining to end. That doens't mean you don't mean these things and that your mother wont take it as it is meant, but please try a bit harder.
Don't say, there are no words to describe - describe, tell your mother what she has meant to you, what she has taugh you, what good things that you can see in yourself are there becuase of her. Give examples of when she was thougthful, caring, honest, etc. Every one wants to be half the woman their mother was, make her understand that if you are half the person she is you will be twice the person raised by anyone else.
You don't have to be a poet to touch someone, but you have to speak your own words to them, not words anyone could use to anyone.
The fact that you want to do this ( and the particular chiches you have chosen) show your feelings for your mother. I have no doubt she has earned them. Tell her in your own words how you feel.
Good luck
2006-12-16 19:29:16 · answer #1 · answered by Zarathustra 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It ,doesn't ,sound ,to ,hallmark but ,maybe ,you ,could ,say ,something ,like ,this''Dear Mom I wanted to let you how much you mean to me.There are not any words in this world to describe how much I love you.You are the best mom anyone could ever ask for,and
you are more than just my mom,you are my best-friend too.I know I can always count on you to be there for me no matter what.You are the most thoughtful,loving,and honest person I know,and I can only hope and pray to grow up to be half of the woman you are today.
2006-12-16 19:59:29 · answer #2 · answered by Rachel D 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Be specific. What is that inspired u to write this? Let her hear the thing u would want o hear. Wonderful, loving and caring are great but let her know the specifics of the situatioms that made u feel that way. She knows u better then and feels appreciated.
2006-12-16 19:20:39 · answer #3 · answered by me 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That sounded great! You're mom will love it! It's not supposed to be from us, it's supposed to from you! She's your mom! You love her so much! We don't know her! Just write about the good things she's done for you!
2006-12-16 19:22:32 · answer #4 · answered by Pawie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good..but how about you make a video bout your mom of course and the background music is the 'thank you mom' song from Good Charlotte..or maybe you can just sing that song to her..
2006-12-16 19:35:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i hope i have a girl like you one day. i'm so touched for your mom. it is perfect, she did a wonderful job with you !!!!
2006-12-16 19:24:11 · answer #6 · answered by happyday to you 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no offense, but ya, you kind of do. Why not put some of your favorite memories in there, and how much they meant to you?
2006-12-16 19:19:35 · answer #7 · answered by dragonberry_huckefly 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Its perfect!
2006-12-16 19:19:06 · answer #8 · answered by iwish40 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very cute :)
2006-12-16 19:19:24 · answer #9 · answered by sami 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋