Sometimes...
When you cry
no one sees your tears.
Sometimes...
When your in
pain no one
sees you hurt.
Sometimes...
you are worried
no one sees your
stress.
Sometimes...
When you are
happy no one
sees your smile:).
2006-12-16 15:30:32 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think that it is really good because you show how you feel. Which is compassion.
2006-12-17 07:28:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a good one. Sad, but quite true. Sometimes life's like that,
2006-12-17 00:19:01 · answer #2 · answered by ~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the theme of loneliness and how you expressed it. Spelling correction -- Sometimes....When you are in pain
(Not "your" because you mean "you are" or "you're")
2006-12-16 23:35:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anniesgran 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes but it seems unfinished. Like there could have been more to say.
2006-12-16 23:38:07 · answer #4 · answered by nikki5150 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not really, but that could be because it's not my style
2006-12-16 23:53:17 · answer #5 · answered by metoyou 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah. Cuz i can Relate to it.
2006-12-17 15:13:07 · answer #6 · answered by liz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes because its unique.
2006-12-16 23:33:40 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋