French...Will you check my Work?

Question

This is what I have. I need spelling and those symbole things checked. So here it is tell me plz if there are any mistakes that you see.

Il s’appelle Abe Simpson.
Voilà mon Grand-Père.
Il a soixant-trois ans.
Elle s’appelle Mona Simpson.
Voilà ma Grand-Mère.
Elle a cinquante-neuf ans.
Il s’appelle Herb Simpson.
Voilà mon Oncle.
Il a trente-quatre ans.
Il s’appelle Homer Simpson.
Voilà mon Père.
Il a quarante ans.
Elle s’appelle Marge Simpson.
Voilà ma Mère.
Elle a cinquante-neuf ans.Je m’applle Gerritt Simpson.
Me Voilà.
J’ai dix-sept ans.
Il s’appelle Bart Simpson.
Voilà mon Frère.
Il a dix ans.
Elle s’appelle Lisa Simpson.
Voilà ma Soeur.
Elle a huit ans.Elle s’appelle Magy Simpson.
Voilà ma Soeur.
Elle a un ans.Il s’appelle Santa’s Petit Assistant.
Voilà mon chien.
Il a trois ans.
Elle s’appelle Snowball Cinq.
Voilà ma chatte.
Elle a trois ans.

So there it all is thanks, plz look carfully. I have but Iam only in French 1. But TY All.

Its about The Simpsons because are teacher gave us the option to use a fake famliy. So why not The Simpsons. Plz pay speacial attention when I talk about myself. If everything is right

Answer 1

It's GOOD!
Please don't make the changes other are talking about : ME VOILÀ is good...voilà moi doesn't mean anything...
and chatte is a female cat YES that is good. (it is a dirty word also...but you hve to be talking dirty for it to sound dirty...)
So Don't change a thing!
It is all goooooood! ( My mother tongue is french)
Good luck in your class!

Answer 2

It looks OK for the most part.
Yes, chatte can be a female cat, but I would use
voilà mon chat because
chatte is also a vulgar word for the female organ!!
(The c**t)!
Only thing I would change is voilà to voici.

Answer 3

Me Voilà - Voilà moi.
Voilà ma chatte - Voilà ma chat

Those were all the mistakes that I caught. I hope you get a good grade. Good Luck! =]

Answer 4

it looks right, although im rusty havent taken french in years
but why is it all about the simpsons???

Answer 5

Tres bien.