Oooohh.................yeahh yeahh........
When I first laid eyes on you
I knew you were my guardian angel
No one in this world could relight my fire
No one in this world could reach for my soul deep within
Like you did
(Bridge)
And I know
This is called love at first sight
That doesn't fear any heights
And I would just pray
For you to remain by my side
(Chorus)
AHHHHHHHH.........(x3)
Do you know I really wanna make out with you?
Do you know I really wanna hook up with you?
AHHHHHHHH....
Do you know
That my affections for you is true......
Til the day I die
But whenever I see you
It just makes me cry
Being not able to have your mind,body and soul
Really torments me inside
No one ever made me feel this painful
Except for you
And now I know
That heartbreak is embodied within me and you
So goodbye....
My lover...
I wanna be the next James Blunt! any opinions? Be more lenient because I'm only a kid..thanks!~
2006-12-16 02:29:50 · 2 answers · asked by gali_poka2 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
It's a hit I loved it... Keep it up ur going places your very good even if your just a kid u can be better than James Blunt but you have to admit that James Blunt does have a Beautiful voice. Good Luck...
2006-12-16 02:37:29 · answer #1 · answered by mysteryousmtz 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it but I think the part where you say "I really want to hook up with you" and "make out with you" are a little too blunt (no pun intended). Try using less obvious language and it will be a lot smoother. Nice work.
2006-12-16 02:33:54 · answer #2 · answered by imation223 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋