I ventured downstairs late last night after hearing lots of noise,
I found a fat man in my chimney with a big bag full of toys.
"I'm stuck inside your chimney and I cannot quite get free,
Would you please help old Santa and lend a hand to me?"
"I am an officer and I know all the laws
before I help, just prove to me that you are Santa Claus!"
"Just go up on the rooftop and look at Rudolphs nose,
then come back down and tell me if it's red and it still glows.
Dashers got the measles, Prancers got a cough,
Vixen almost missed the roof and my sleigh almost fell off.
Blitzens got an attitude, Donners just upset,
and I am starting to believe they need to see a vet."
So I went up on the rooftop all covered up with snow,
I saw a sleigh with reindeer, the first ones nose was all aglow.
They all were there and waiting for St. Nick to come on top,
to get in the sleigh and take them to the next deserving stop.
2006-12-16 00:43:11 · 12 answers · asked by Joe 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I went back in to Santa and said "I feel such great remorse,
that I have just delayed you from continuing your course."
I pulled him from the chimney
then he looked at me and said:
"Tomorrow when you wake up
all things will be alright,
you believed in me and freed me,
and helped save Christmas night".
Merry Christmas to all!!!!
2006-12-16 00:49:00 · update #1
yeh , it was good but what happened to me in your poem?
2006-12-16 00:46:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
you ought to put up it and word if someone ought to draw ideal images of each reindeer's moves. as well as an in intensity to omit photo. a vet want it as a narrative to have out in the course of the Christmas season. actually have a vet tale liker Santa deliberating the vet visit. or the vet showing up in the north pole. animal fanatics oftentimes want it to study to their pets.
2016-10-18 09:03:17 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it
2006-12-16 00:57:05 · answer #3 · answered by unreal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Needs a bit more polishing ... otherwise: great!
2006-12-16 05:42:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice bro.
2006-12-16 00:47:24 · answer #5 · answered by Ken 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was o.k., think I will stick to the traditional instead.
2006-12-16 04:31:09 · answer #6 · answered by tamara.knsley@sbcglobal.net 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is really good. i think that it would be a great poem for kids
2006-12-16 00:46:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good one
2006-12-16 00:50:20 · answer #8 · answered by Kelrec 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are getting coal for christmas non believer
2006-12-16 00:47:07 · answer #9 · answered by Talking Hat 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i like it
2006-12-16 00:46:43 · answer #10 · answered by londonbudpark 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋