Hey, thanks! Please read the poem and tell me if it's good. Please give me some feedback:
Love eternal,
Love divine,
Say I’m yours,
And you’ll be mine.
From all I’ve known,
To all I knew,
None as perfect,
Perfect as you.
If I could,
Say the words,
The words that I feel.
Trust me darling,
Oh I would,
How deeply I’d reveal.
Love eternal,
Love divine,
Say I’m yours,
And you’ll be mine.
2006-12-14 15:46:02 · 7 answers · asked by froggiegirl1013 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
very nice now do me a favor go to poetry.com n register it and anything else u write so ppl cant steal ur stuff and u get noticed like i did. mine are under the names ...danys betts and lenda betts if u would like to read mine
2006-12-14 15:48:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
You really shouldn't have to ask if your poem is good. A poem like this is about putting your feelings into words. You are the only person who can judge whether you have done that or not.
2006-12-14 17:15:34 · answer #2 · answered by NASA C 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nope. Utter crap. Quit writing now, or at least stick to a form with some redeeming value.
2006-12-14 15:58:32 · answer #3 · answered by Mike 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um... if you are in junior high, it's okay. If you're over twenty... well, poetry isn't for everyone.
2006-12-14 16:31:15 · answer #4 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It will not sell.
2006-12-14 19:40:44 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it flows well. not bad.
2006-12-14 15:56:40 · answer #6 · answered by GoatFingers 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yes!! i like it !!
2006-12-14 15:53:27 · answer #7 · answered by smokingstonersweetheart 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋