What do you think of my lyrics?
Mother and father had to work 3 jobs they would come home at noon. They would give me a kiss and then tell me good-bye while I said I love you.
So now im sittin here wonderin what i was here for, but all along i knew, all needed was you. Now you make me feel at home, you make me understand, why i was born on this earth, to prodly take a stand. So now i gotta say that all i wanted was you, but now that ive waited all my life I relized you need me to. Last week i saw you at the county fair waiting in line for a ride, I was up on stage singin a song bout a big change in my life. How your tore a hole in it by tellin me good-bye, saying were never goin make it but now im here you think that twice. So i just wanted you to know you were the onley love of my life, so how does that make you feel, i could have been your wife. So now im sittin here wonderin what i was here for, but all along i knew all needed was you. Now you make me feel at home you make me und
2006-12-14 12:26:42 · 6 answers · asked by Shelby 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Television
Learn how to spell and punctuate and your lyrics might be legible. Right now, I can't figure out what you're trying to say.
2006-12-14 16:52:42 · answer #1 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fantastic! Really draws a good picture. Very emotional, would make a great acoustic number. God you have talent
2006-12-14 12:29:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lyrically it's not bad. Would be easier to read with better formatting and why does it end with und?
2006-12-14 12:53:42 · answer #3 · answered by D.F 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really good. you did a good job on the lyric
2006-12-14 12:47:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good i like it if only i new the tune but it sonds great
2006-12-14 12:31:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds nice..and cute....
but the point is tht ..... it shld gel well with the music......
2006-12-14 12:30:22 · answer #6 · answered by coffeeanu 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋