In a dramatic sense, it all seems to mend together. Insight beyond the realm of space, at a higher elevation seemingly floating among the clouds. Grass becomes greener and the oceans’ waters bluer as the birds chirp their joyful songs. Days of stagnant joy stirred by the world’s emotion. The nights' drunken dizziness engulfs all. The crooked paths straightened by the sobering light of sunrise. Thoughts repetitive motions you witness… latter recollections forgotten. Days, nights, forever more……
Didnt put much time into it just three or four minutes....
2006-12-14 08:51:31 · 6 answers · asked by ElDarado05 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
nice poem!!! very insightful!!
2006-12-14 15:28:06 · answer #1 · answered by shrimpy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If u wrote that poem for about 3 or 4 minutes,
I just have to say to u wow.
keep it up,I liked it!!
2006-12-14 08:56:04 · answer #2 · answered by Pinky 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty wonderful poem u can make a book
10 from 10 goodluck !
2006-12-14 09:03:42 · answer #3 · answered by micho 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good sweetie
2006-12-14 08:56:24 · answer #4 · answered by Sunnie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Nice abs too, btw.
2006-12-14 08:53:44 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wait until you have something to say. Sorry but that's just ... bibble.
2006-12-14 08:58:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋