Is my resume clear?? check...thx..?

Question

This is one part of my resume...if there are some errors...let me know...

Employment History

1. Teaching Assistant(2004.10~2005.03)
Taught Math
Managed the class
Contacted student’s parents
Prepared grade report (EXCEL)
Created tests, proctored tests, and grades tests
2.Secretary (2006.07~2006.09)
Received calls and customers
Designed projects
Arranged meeting
Made power points
Sorted official data

If it's quiet alright..tell me..thx

Answer 1

"Prepared grade report (EXCEL)"

Might change to "Prepared grade reports (EXCEL)" (plural)

"Created tests, proctored tests, and grades tests"

Might want to change this to "..... graded tests."

"Received calls and customers"

Might change to "....greeted customers"

"Arranged meeting"

Might change to "Organized Meetings." (plural)

"Made power points"

Might change to "Created PowerPoints Presentations"

I would also space between paragraphs 1 and 2.

Answer 2

I'm guessing the format looks different on your computer?
Also - is this for a job in the US? If so, we don't normally write dates like that. (month-year is what we use. not year-month)

You are missing a space between "Teaching Assistant" and "("
Last point in same section - "Created ... grades - should be graded (Both past tense)

Made power points - should be "Made PowerPoint presentations"


Hope that helps!

Answer 3

That's the worst resume I have ever seen. You need to get some examples of good resumes and use them.

Answer 4

well dznt look like a resume to me,, chk out for some online samples and follow them. they are all professional resumes

Answer 5

Expand more on where you did it? and try not to put it in bullets and put it in pargraph form

Answer 6

I wouldn't Hire you!!!