Can you relate to this poem?

Question

Idle Chit-Chat

So hey, I was thinking, that whilst we’re talking here
Maybe we could spill some goss, I’m sure there’s some to share
I was hoping that you’d tell me, or even alleviate
To whom it is that has your heart, that info would be great
Is he soft and caring too, is he something special?
Will you marry him one day, or is that thought just awful?
Do you love him just so much, that inside you feel queasy?
And thinking of the future paired, is something that comes easy?
I think of that and all these thoughts, because maybe you have guessed
That deep, deep down inside of me there’s a question that I’ve missed
I wonder much, I truly do, would you join with me, not him?
Though I suppose, unfortunately, that possibility’s slim

Answer 1

Its lovely, well done! Sadly I can relate to it and longing for someone that isnt interested in you is sooooooooo depressing :-( just remember there is a special someone for everyone, its that optimistic hope that keeps me moving.

Answer 2

No one has my heart, **** mate
and no one's soft and caring
Unless your baby's truly new
and none the worse for wearing
Will you marry, still, one day
With queasy at your door
Thinking of the future paired
So queasy, nevermore?

Deep deep down beside of me
There's a feeling that I missed
I wonder was it worth it though
The winter cold, the summer's hoe
And back still breaking from the 'woe'
Of that slim slim possibility

Answer 3

That's a nice poem, but I can't relate to it. I'm not really all for meeting people online for that purpose.

Answer 4

yes i can relate to love lost and the jealously that this person might be with someone else and not you. Nice poem.

Answer 5

wow,you could be like a writer or a poet, this is yet to be relatable to mee!!