help with grammar and story writing
2006-12-13 15:07:17 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Grammatical: He asked if she wanted to go FOR a walk. She replied simply, "I would love to."
Logically: What's so simple about "I would love to"? By saying she would "love" to, she's expressing a deep desire which required not only thought but conviction. What's so simple about that? What would be a complex answer? You're using the world simply just to fill in space, because her answer was not particularly simple.
My Suggestion: He asked shyly if she'd like to go for a walk. She smiled and replied with a simple "Yes".
2006-12-13 15:54:58 · answer #1 · answered by ZenPenguin 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
This is how I would write it:
He asked if she wanted to go for a walk. She simply replied, "I would love to."
2006-12-13 23:09:24 · answer #2 · answered by mike m 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋