Your eyes won't let my thoughts go back to sleep.
Your words draw me across 2000 miles.
I don't know you at all, and yet I know
You better than my friends of many years.
The days I spent with you are like a tape
I play, rewind, play, rewind, and play.
Whenever I remember something new,
I feel as though you touched me on the cheek.
I miss you as the grass awaits the wind,
Or as the morning sky awaits the sun.
Although I look for you in every doorway,
I find only the darkness in my heart.
2006-12-13 10:34:23 · 6 answers · asked by ♥babygurl♥ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
very nice, did you write it yourself? if so you are very thoughtful
10/10, you should be a poet
=)
2006-12-13 10:40:00 · answer #1 · answered by §èxÿtà mmý ® 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it all until the last line about darkness in your heart, which I find depressing. Why not find light in your heart? Life is about seeking joy, not expecting sorrow.
2006-12-13 18:40:32 · answer #2 · answered by LindaLou 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow really good keep it up! <3
2006-12-13 18:39:10 · answer #3 · answered by Bella 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good good, out of 10 i will give you 10 :) lol
2006-12-13 18:38:30 · answer #4 · answered by ♥Angel♥ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thank you.
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2006-12-13 18:36:10 · answer #5 · answered by Sociopath 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
aww thats so sweet gurl...cool
2006-12-13 18:35:20 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋