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Games are played without consent
Riddles given but not a hint
suspicions pleading to the questions they present
to be fullfilled is their intent.
Tricks and traps played and laid
seeking the answers that evade
compassion absent and mercies fade
the price that's owed will be what's paid
Conquest will be the fine reward
to watch the vanquished crawl once more
to drag his knees across the floor
his spirits fall but theirs will soar.
To bring him down again in shame
how dare he challenge with this game
shackled now with guilt and sorrow
too down and low to face the morrow
Depression brings down it's heavy hand
too hard to run through sinking sand
though once a runner in the race
hopes and dreams were his to chase
he now surrenders with disgrace
brought back down to take his place
without the wings that gave him flight
the tunnel that once had shone it's light
grows dark and dim as endless night
with the loss of will to fight.

2006-12-12 18:00:07 · 7 answers · asked by RWIZ 3 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

Win they must and damn the cost
the fee is paid by those who lost.

2006-12-12 18:01:53 · update #1

Thank you all fo your comments

2006-12-12 18:10:14 · update #2

It was 4 years ago but I believe these were my motivations.

Depression, guilt, feelings of failure and betrayal

2006-12-12 18:13:15 · update #3

7 answers

very impressive..keep up the good work...ok u did that in 2003...its going to be 2007 now..isthere any other poem u are hiding from me?....c'mon u have the talent..its simple..nice..well in laymen terms...and u know to put the words perfectly...

u should not stop...u must keep on writing to upgrade yourself...

2006-12-12 18:05:44 · answer #1 · answered by L_n_C_fReAk 3 · 1 0

The winner ,always a winner will be. No remorse to the feelings of the loser of the game of life. He feels contempt with those that are so weak. His ego lifted by being able to trod upon the poor, the sorrowful, egotistically proclaiming winners take all, there is no room or need for losers. Banishment should be just for those that have tried and lost, no need for sympathy.
The winner knows that he too is vulnerable, and is trying to retain the superior attitude of self rightness to keep his objective, always a winner.

2006-12-13 14:47:11 · answer #2 · answered by Charles H 4 · 1 0

Interesting. What were your thoughts behind the theme for this poem? I'm reading a battle of life and living... what was your intention for the reader to take away from this piece?

2006-12-13 02:10:04 · answer #3 · answered by spamneggzzz 2 · 1 0

Very nice. I think ive got a tear in my eye. LOL

2006-12-13 02:01:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

very good but I hate fighting weakness is power

2006-12-13 02:12:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

i likes it

2006-12-13 02:01:50 · answer #6 · answered by kitty is ANGRY!™ 5 · 1 0

too long!

2006-12-13 02:02:15 · answer #7 · answered by RZA 4 · 1 0

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