Few plays epitomize the meaning of a tragedy better than the heartrending tale of Romeo and Juliet. Romeo Montague and Juliet Capulet are two seemingly inseparable lovers lost in a bubble of blossoming and devoted love. Their minds float in an oblivious world where love conquers all, where peace can be made between the two feuding families without further violence, and where they can be united forever. However, their airy utopia is popped by the pitiless blade of reality, leading to their untimely deaths. But was it really the vial of poison and dagger that led to their tragic demise? A close observer will realize that underneath the most apparent factors, the dominant cause of their woe is ultimately the underlying structure of the Veronian society.
2006-12-12 12:51:21 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The last sentence does not show the dominant cause.
I'm still waiting.
Don't get mad but - it seems you are trying to be frivilous, flowerly and bubble of blossoming and devoted love. ? really?
You don't seem real.
You just seem that you looked up other words and replaced them in someone else's paragraph.
Now - I believe their tragic demise was their violent rebellion. Yes they said "It's my way or the highway". It's another example of "all or nothing" thinking.
No negotiation, no let's have faith, no let's sleep on it .............just all or nothing thinking.
When you don't have faith, there are no untimely deaths. When you give up, death is the only alternative.
GOD bless.
MBA - Boston Univ.
CPA-retired
2006-12-12 13:00:30 · answer #1 · answered by May I help You? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would break this sentence: Their minds float in an oblivious world where love conquers all, where peace can be made between the two feuding families without further violence, and where they can be united forever.
And i would put a semicolon in the next sentence instead of a comma.
other than that, just check your spelling and you're great to go!
2006-12-12 20:57:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good...just make sure it's all in the same tense..I think you lapsed into past tense at one point, but nothing major to merit major changing
2006-12-12 20:56:40 · answer #3 · answered by blankstares 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo I think it was great., but i think it could use a little bit more info on their families
2006-12-12 20:56:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
As far as gramar goes, it looks good to me.
2006-12-12 20:56:05 · answer #5 · answered by hrlygal4christ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋