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Please rephrase these sentences to sound better and I'll give you 10 points. I'm writing a message to my friend and don't want to sound stupid or repeat myself so please help to rephrase these sentences and I'll give 10 points the best answer!



I know what you mean. Yeah we kissed and it was a soft sensual long *** kiss but there wasn't any tongue action lol. He knew I was nervous and that's why I think he didn't french me but I'm relieved he wasn't one of those guys that cram their tongue down your throat on the first date. It was perfect and my cheeks turned bright red and he thought it was cute. I haven't been able to stop thinking about it. My mom was giving me weird looks because I had this stupid grin on my face when I walked inside. I think she knows we kissed but hasn't asked me. I'm excited about our 2nd date.

2006-12-11 15:53:58 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships Other - Family & Relationships

7 answers

You know what? It sounds good the way it is. You are sending a message to your friend, not an english teacher. You aren't repeating yourself and it doesn't sound stupid. It just sounds like how friends would talk to each other. Just send it the way it is. That's my opinion, anyway.

2006-12-11 16:01:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I understand.We did kiss but is passionate kiss without tongue contact.The reason is that he is an considerate guy not like some guy that try to choke me with their tongue on the 1st date and yet I'm comfortable with it.He thinks that I'm cute when I'm blush.My mom gave me a weird look when she saw my stupid grin.Guess she know we kissed but didn't pop any questions yet.
Can't wait for the next date

2006-12-12 00:07:31 · answer #2 · answered by Janet Y 3 · 0 0

Look deeply into the person's eyes and say very little. Why talk so much when obviously the physical aspect was so dreamy?
Hold hands and just say, "Kissing you took me straight to heaven." Smile, have a breath mint on hand and don't blab your head off. You two seem to be naturals,
Pucker up and good luck!

2006-12-12 00:00:53 · answer #3 · answered by artist-oranit.com. 5 · 0 0

We kissed and I'm excited about our 2nd date!

2006-12-11 23:56:21 · answer #4 · answered by Majestic One 4 · 0 0

Yes- it's all true! I DO kiss on the first date.

2006-12-12 00:33:41 · answer #5 · answered by Violet Pearl 7 · 1 0

on our first date we connected with a long sensual kiss. that was really nice. you knew that i was a little bit nervous and you didnt force yourself on me. that was so repectful of you. you are diffently the kind of person i want to see again. i cant wait until our next date, i wont be nervous so wont have to hold back on anything.

2006-12-12 00:27:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

what are you retarded or something....why are you telling your friend information like this..just to show off or make her feel bad......this is private sweet info that you hide in your heart and it makes you smile.

2006-12-12 00:02:15 · answer #7 · answered by Olive 4 · 1 0

It sounds perfect as is. ;O)

2006-12-11 23:57:16 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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