what do you guys think about this poem? Plus I need help with a title for it...?

Question

When I first laid my eyes on you.
You changed everything about me.
My life,dreams,and my soul.

After that,all I ever wanted,
Was to be with you.
It became my number one goal.

We became friends,after getting
To know each other a bit.
I knew then it wasn't time to quit.

I'm really attracted to you.
And you know it's true.
But do you like me the way I like you?

I'll keep trying. But I guess I'll never know.
Only time will tell. Whether you'll
Say. "Yes" or you'll say. "No."

Answer 1

It's an okay poem, I think. The line "It became my number one goal" sounds a little impersonal, but I do like the wording of the last open-ended stanza. How about "Waiting for an Answer" or "To the Woman I Love" for a title?

Answer 2

I think it is beautiful. I smiled when I finished reading it.
As for the title, that may be a bit tough ....the title can be just as personal as the poetry...
Assuming I understand this poem I would suggest

Here's to Dreams coming True

Answer 3

It has a rough rhyme scheme, and you could maybe substitute the word attracted with a more romantic term. Otherwise, it's good because your feelings are really clear. Good Luck.
P.S. I suck at titles : )

Answer 4

Its great I love it
I have one check it out its in philosphy it called Glad I met you
a name for your poem could be
my friend I like you or
i like you and hope you the same
my friend I hope you like me as much as I like you
you said if anyone wanted to chat e-mail you
but theres no e-maaddress
if you do want to chat mine is [e-mail]

Answer 5

try Ever Hopeful or Heart On The Line Or Dammit dude cant ya see Im nuts about Ya

hey good luck with this guy.

Answer 6

Very sweet. You should write for hallmark

Answer 7

it isn't bad

i can't understand the rhyme scheme, if there even is one.

a good title would be: hope

Answer 8

you should title it, "my life, dream, and soul" or, "You and only you"