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I'm really bad at writing poetry and I really could use some help...maybe if someone can give me an idea how I could start or possibly give me a line I could use. I want to make it really creative. It's for creative writing class...any help would be appreciated!!

2006-12-10 06:11:34 · 8 answers · asked by yeppperz 1 in Dining Out Fast Food

8 answers

Yo quiero, Taco Bell
I'm trying not to dwell
But since I ate your taco
I'm not feeling quite as swell

But don't you fret, you see
Soon again I'll feel like me
And I'll be at your drive-thru
For a taco, chips and cheese

2006-12-10 06:19:57 · answer #1 · answered by secret_oktober_girl 5 · 2 0

Pick a tune from a song you like, and just start soupting anything about your subject in rythem to the music, There is something about music that opens up even the most reclutant poet. Get a few friends to play along. A sentance or story game is fun. You start with a sentance or 2 ( no more) then the next person ads thier sentance and so on. You should find enough material froom either of the 2 suggestions. Have fun!

2006-12-10 14:21:51 · answer #2 · answered by flutteredonby 2 · 0 1

Dear taco, you’re the one that I dream
I wish I could have you with cheese and cream
But not now taco, coz you have ecoli
This is really bad for my blood stream

If only you weren’t so dangerous
You would be my food supply
But that would be really bad coz u have ecoli
Den I’d probably die

Oh taco your the only one
That can give me that food satisfactory
Like it properly done
That way you make my tum rum

But I dream of that day that I finally eat you taco
If only you didn’t give ecoli in my gut and in my gut
xxxxxx

2006-12-11 11:17:18 · answer #3 · answered by Beliver 2 · 0 1

UmmMM think of what u want to write about and think of rymimh words and soon thin kof a poen to put together cuz 2 tell u the truth i sm not hat good at poetry either

2006-12-13 16:06:39 · answer #4 · answered by Hugs r nice but kisses r better 2 · 0 0

KizKat Barrett Browning

Sonnets from the bathroom...ode' to Taco Bell

IV
Thou hast heard my calling from my bathroom door,
Most gracious singer of melodious farts! where
The dancers will break footing, from the need to do a poo,
Of watching up thy snarling lips,
say - you'd best move out of my way.
And dost thou lift this house's latch to let the foul air out
For this hand soap..is it thines?
and canst thou bear the smell
Thou let thy poo drop there unaware
In folds of golden fulness upon my bathroom floor?
Look up and see the door is broken off the hinges,
The toilet paper and the towels thrown to the roof!
My stomach churns against thy porcelin God.
Hush, call no echo up in further proof
Of flatulence! there's a sound within
That weeps . . as thou must fart . . . alone, aloof..
Oh Lord..."I'm gonna blow"!

VI
Go far from me. Least I feel that I shall spew
Henceforward in thy shadow. Evermore
Alone upon the threshold of thy bathroom door
Of an individuals privacy, I shall command thee leave
From the many uses of my bathroom spray,
no longer can I lift my hand
Serenely on the keyboard as before,
Without the sense of that which I forbore--
Thy touch upon my back. Thy assistance as I heave
Ecoli tries to part us, leaves thy stomach in mine throat
With nausea that beats me down. What do I do?
And what I now dream includes thee, as I whine
Such the taste of my own bile. And when I spew
To God for myself do I pray and cry,
He hears my prayers, least I shall die
And sees within my eyes the tears of pain.

VII
The face of all the world is changed, I think,
Since I first heard of the Ecoli scare
Move..no be still, oh, be still, beside me, as I groan
Betwixt me and the dreadful scare of death
Of obvious relief, had I, thought to ask,
Is the food safe?
I was caught up in my love, of Taco Bell
Of life it's such a sorrow. Without my Chalupa will I die
God save me I cry, I am so weak,
And praise its sweetness, Oh Taco Bell my sweet
The names of thy items on thy menu,
are heavenly to me,
are changed away, because of thine green onion
For where thou art..I shalt be, there or here;
And this . .longing... this lute and song . . I now play,
(The singing angels know) and are so dear
Because thy name moves upon my trembling lips...
as I say.....
Taco Bell...Oh my Taco Bell... I'll love thee forevermore!

2006-12-10 17:47:59 · answer #5 · answered by kizkat 4 · 0 1

google "sonnet" and find the prose. then just write about what you want to. its not that hard.

2006-12-10 14:12:54 · answer #6 · answered by HansonFan 6 · 0 0

you could start with....


how much i miss thee glorious taco bell....

2006-12-10 14:21:00 · answer #7 · answered by alia_vahed 3 · 0 1

secret_oktober_girl, you ROCK!

2006-12-13 15:08:27 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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