Although I am not a business-relevant major student, I once chose the course of commercial correspondence.
If this sentence is wrong, modify it. thx
2006-12-10 02:50:48 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
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..................PERFECT SENTENCE IS..........................
"Although I am not a management student, I chose the course of commercial correspondence once"
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THE ONE I TOLD IS PERFECT.
2006-12-10 02:56:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
This sentence is wrong, unless you are trying to indicate that:
* you are not a major student (and are instead a minor one);
* your are not "business-relevant" -- whatever that means; and probably also that
* you once chose commercial correspondence as your course of action.
What I think you mean to say is something more along the lines of:
Although I am not majoring in business, I have studied commercial correspondence.
Or:
Although I am not a business student, I have studied commercial correspondence.
2006-12-10 02:58:46 · answer #2 · answered by ljb 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your sentence is not bad, but I think is should flow a little smoother. Try this and see how it fits for you:
Although I am not a business major, at one time I chose the course of commercial correspondence.
2006-12-10 03:22:46 · answer #3 · answered by Rerose 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it was me I would put...
Although I did not major in Business-Relevance, I once chose the course of Commercial Correspondence.
but your way seems great too..
tootles~
2006-12-10 02:55:27 · answer #4 · answered by a_w60 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although my major is not business, I once took a course that dealt with commercial correspondence.
2006-12-10 03:23:22 · answer #5 · answered by iwasnotanazipolka 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your sentence may be grammatically correct but it's clumsy as heck.
"I am not a business major but I have chosen the course of commercial correspondence."
2006-12-10 03:24:22 · answer #6 · answered by robert2011@sbcglobal.net 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"Although I am not a business major, I took a course on 'Commercial Correspondence'."
2006-12-10 02:57:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
take out the word "student"
2006-12-10 02:52:34 · answer #8 · answered by kwightman69 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
seems correct to me ...though u can do without the word 'student'...
2006-12-10 02:57:05 · answer #9 · answered by aviatorkaps 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is proper and no changes need to be done.
2006-12-10 02:59:59 · answer #10 · answered by professor smart 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
on the grammar and spelling side it is great.
2006-12-10 02:53:05 · answer #11 · answered by DR.PHIL-A-LIKE 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋