Each & everyone of use have something inside of them that they hate.
It aches with in
We can't describe it
But we all have it
We wake & face our days with fear, doubt, & uncertainty from what will come.
Some lie, cry, or fight about this thing inside.
We all want, need, & search for more & more.
It's never truly enough.
I believe were all never satisfied.
We may say we are, but that is just a lie.
Deep down inside you know you want more.
Instead you tell yourself "I'm just fine how I am."
A few weeks later your telling your self "I want to be more this I need to become this"
Life is but a cycle.
It may be because I am young.
From my days on this earth, my mind has been this cycle.
I say "I'm fine"
Then a year, week, or even day later, I'm down thinking to myself "This isn't enough?"
I'm creating myself each day.
But is it just me…or does everybody get fed up with making more…
Sometimes…I want to just stay the same & not deal with life.
Then I get bored, & begin thinking more & more of everything.
I get depressed.
I feel weak.
I act cold.
Then the next day I wake having all these new thoughts.
More words more thoughts
More **** to deal with.
Life's a *****
Sometimes I don't want to deal with it.
Call me selfish, weak, or anything else.
I am sometimes…
But ****…
It's hard when you don't have a lot.
So **** you….
Hell...
**** this life…
That's what I think…
Suicidal thoughts…
We all have them…
We're all ****** up…
So let's all just live….
No worry's, doubts, fears…
One life…
Why waist it on pointless thoughts…
It's all simple…
If you just be…
Who ever the hell you are…
Flow on threw life…
In the best way possible,
Laugh, smile, grin…
Cherish, love, give,
Live life…
Don't let life live you…
2006-12-09 18:42:32 · 9 answers · asked by Savanna 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Hey "dally B" I'm sorry if I offended you...I was not imposing my thoughts on & I most certainly was not forcing you nor anyone to accept my ideas. That’s not at all what I was intending. This writing is not for acceptance…this is for honesty to myself no one else…My eyes…my mind….I’m letting you in…Yes, I said “**** you” Someday I feel like saying **** you to everyone on this earth….not just you… Instead of concentrating on that one sentence…Why not try putting your thought into the rest of my writing…Then maybe you would have a clue on who I am…Instead of being sensitive… why offend me & call me unstable by not even having a clue as to who I am? When I am expressing myself & sharing it with others…How I truly feel…With all of that done & said. thank you for your honesty….
P.S. **** you =]
2006-12-09 19:30:48 · update #1
I thought it was pretty good and Freudian in some ways because of the inside ID that we all have according to Freud, but as soon as you started swearing I felt that I didn't want to read anymore. Why? Because it automatically made me think and feel that you're imposing your thoughts on me. It wasn't me exploring the words and getting the feelings. It was you swearing at me and forcing me to accept your ideas. So, I think that, if you wrote this you are a very unstable person because your feelings and moods change from one line to the next. And I also think that if you want people to agree with what you say you need to let us discover what lies behind your words.
2006-12-09 18:51:09 · answer #1 · answered by Dally J 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Daily B, you don’t seem to understand the poem. The whole poem was an expression of the author’s thoughts and feelings. It does not ask you to think the same; it asks you what you think of the concepts displayed. I don’t understand why you think the swearing itself forces you to accept the ideas. The swear words were merely a part of the expression. For example Savanna expressed that “Life’s a ****”, in the similar way Savanna also wrote “Life is but a cycle”. In both instances Savanna is describing her perception of life. You seemed create a false purpose for the poem. There is no indication of forcefulness, only the invitation to consider Savanna’s perception and its effects, and in the end consider her advice.
2006-12-09 20:15:04 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your are right, life isn't meaningful. and I feel the same. I feel that i'm trapped in the same cycle everyday, and i can't find a way to get out of it.
2006-12-09 20:46:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Shazbot
2006-12-09 18:50:26 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-09-03 09:10:02 · answer #5 · answered by rentschler 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
give yourself permission sometimes to do absolutely nothing and be absolutely worthless, accepting it and feeling that it's ok, you have permission. when you can, get up, then and carry on.
2006-12-09 18:56:24 · answer #6 · answered by imustbblonde 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"No one in the world ever gets what they want...and that is beautiful".
2006-12-09 18:54:17 · answer #7 · answered by tcb9020 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel like you feel. You are not alone.
2006-12-09 18:54:21 · answer #8 · answered by sugarpacketchad 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
What do I honestly think? DUH! That's nothing new.
2006-12-09 20:12:06 · answer #9 · answered by No Ma'am 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋