softly i put your hand in mine
as you boarded the last plain
for it was one last short goodbye
knowing i'll never see you again
the plain took off toward the heavens
leaving me alone without you
although we often say friends forever
sometimes luck just isn't true
(chorus)
and now your on your way to the heavens
where you'll find peace i know
it fills my heart to know your out of pain
but i just can't let go
you smiled at me with a teardrop
saying it was your time to die
but the hardest thing is saying
the simplest words goodbye
they burried you this evening
the ground so cold, so dry
i keep your memories close to me
i never wanted to say goodbye
i can still hear your voice
calling for me to play
but when i turn and look around
i realize you have gone away
(repeat chorus twice)
goodbye
2006-12-09 17:34:52 · 22 answers · asked by nakita 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
beautiful
He looks upon your heart like it's the largest jewel
He knows that you were perfect
God made exeption to the rule
Dad says baby
I look on you time to time
Know that I love you
forever in a timeless way
oh my baby
keep your grief at bay
2006-12-09 17:48:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That Was So Beautiful Your Very Talented You Made Me Cry Seriously That Was Very Good!
2006-12-09 18:16:17 · answer #2 · answered by dolly w 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good, quite touching. I lost my father when I was 14, sorry for your loss, I know it's not easy. I would change but 1 word, plain should be plane.
2006-12-09 17:46:10 · answer #3 · answered by Dale T 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'm sorry to take heed to about your grandfather. with regard to the poem i love the way you used the prepare "pulling away" as a emblem of the unlucky activities reguarding your grandfather. it truly is a means utilized by most of the most notorious poets, you definetely are exhibiting means if you're utilizing thoughts which incorporates this. save going with the poem, possibly stretch it longer? Make the prepare journey even extra significant, provide it a destination? A prepare station finished of light. gentle to foreshadow your grandfathers vacation to heaven.
2016-11-25 02:00:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really sad and beautiful took me back to when my mother and dad died. Hit hard.
Sorry for your loss I can tell you really loved him God Bless and take care of you.
2006-12-09 17:52:47 · answer #5 · answered by JUAN FRAN$$$ 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I lost my dad this year to cancer so i'm still feeling the loss and it's beautiful even with the tears i shed reading it.
2006-12-09 17:43:31 · answer #6 · answered by Chele 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is beautiful!!! My father died 3 yrs ago on easter sunday and I could only wish I came up with something that beautiful and heartfelt to say.
2006-12-09 17:37:53 · answer #7 · answered by choco-vanilla 3 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I liked it, appropriate for the situation. Sorry for your loss. God Bless.
2006-12-09 17:46:17 · answer #8 · answered by DepthsOfMyEyes 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't change one single word. Beautiful.
2006-12-09 17:37:50 · answer #9 · answered by OrangeCharlie 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Touching, your dad would be proud, sorry for your lose.
2006-12-09 17:39:53 · answer #10 · answered by Headshot 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋