it is i romeo
you fill my life with brightness like the sun
everytime you speak is like an angel singing a peaceful song
you shine brighter than any other star in the night sky
you are a crimson rose in a field of white roses
you twinkle like glitter falling slowly catching the light
its for english Romeo & juliet
2006-12-09 13:53:16 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
wow, this was amazing!sooo descriptive. i like how you used specific traits, adjectoives, abnd metaphors. great work. on a scale of 1-10, it would be 10! I loved it! sounds like high school level writng!
2006-12-09 14:28:23 · answer #1 · answered by minney mouse! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh! Romeo, 'tis I, your Juliette
You fill my life with brightness as if 'twere the sun
When every time you shalt speak
'Tis as an angel that doth sing in peaceful song
You shine brighter than any star in the evening's inky sky
You are my crimson rose, a sentinel in a field of roses white
you sparkle as twinkling glitter, and thus do steal all other light
(what do you think of these changes? I'll let you do the punctuation).
2006-12-09 22:45:46 · answer #2 · answered by Donald W 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about--
"Your voice is like an angel singing a peaceful song."
And--
"You are a crimson rose in a field of white carnations."
2006-12-09 22:21:36 · answer #3 · answered by JD 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Good Job!! Sweet.
2006-12-09 22:13:56 · answer #4 · answered by J B W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good, i like it.
2006-12-09 22:01:55 · answer #5 · answered by xothebestox 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad!
2006-12-09 21:55:47 · answer #6 · answered by raredawn 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2006-12-09 21:55:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋