Help me check my grammar mistake? thankyou.
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To catch a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy or running nose or coughing none stop. Even worse, you may get a fever and fell sour and pain all over your body. My suggestion is, put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you got home, lie on a bed and take a rest. Anyhow, when you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do. The only thing you can do is, wait until your cold to heal.
2006-12-09 12:15:36 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Catching a cold is a painful experience. You may feel dizzy, cough non-stop, or have a running nose. Even worse, you may feel sour, painful, and catch a fever. My suggestion is to put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you get home, lie down and rest because there isn't much you can do. The only thing you can do is wait until the cold is gone.
2006-12-09 12:26:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
To catch a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy, have a running nose or be coughing non-stop. Even worse, you may have a fever as well as feel sore and pain all over your body. My suggestion is, put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you get home, get some rest. When you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do. The only thing you can do is wait until you are better.
I am not a teacher or an expert by any means so it may not even be right. I tried not to changed your text but did in a couple places.
2006-12-09 12:26:06 · answer #2 · answered by hunny_oh 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Listen to anybody but Smil3y... she's asking for english help herself..good heavens..
* in a lot of the corrections people used none-stop...there is no such word as none-stop..it's non-stop..sorry guys
To catch a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy, have a running nose or cough continually. If your symptoms are even worse, you may get a fever and feel pain and soreness all over your body. My suggestion is to put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you got home, try to get in bed and rest. Sometimes however, when you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do but wait until it goes away.
2006-12-09 12:39:19 · answer #3 · answered by GreyRainbow 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Try this...
Catching a cold can be a painful experience. You might experience dizziness, a runny nose, or none stop coughing. Worse yet, you might even get a fever and feel sour all over. If this happens to you, I suggest you put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. When you get home from the doctor, lie on a bed and take a rest. Ultimately, when you catch a cold, there is really nothing you can do but wait for it to pass. Your body just needs time to heal itself.
2006-12-09 12:30:22 · answer #4 · answered by jrstina624 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Catching a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy or have a runny nose. You might cough non-stop. Even worse, you may get a fever or have pain all over your body. My suggestion is that you put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you get home, lie on a bed and take a rest. However, when you catch a cold, there is not much you can do except wait until your cold symptoms pass.
2006-12-09 12:25:54 · answer #5 · answered by Wiser1 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
To catch a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy, have a runny nose or cough non-stop. Even worse, you may get a fever and feel sore all over your body. My suggestion is, put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you got home, lie in bed and take a rest. Anyhow, when you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do. The only thing you can do is, wait until your cold heals.
2006-12-09 12:25:28 · answer #6 · answered by silligrl357 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
To catch a cold is a painful experience. You might feel dizzy, or have a runny nose, or none-stop coughing. Even worse, you may get a fever and feel sour and pain all over your body. My suggestion is to put down your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you get home, lie on a bed and take a rest. Anyhow, when you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do. The only thing you can do is, wait for your cold to heal.
2006-12-09 12:27:27 · answer #7 · answered by Steve C 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
To catch a cold is a very painful experience. You might feel dizzy or have a running nose or coughing uncontrollablly. Even worse, you may get a fever and fell sour and pain all over your body. My suggestion is, reduce your work hours or even stop your work and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you got home, lye on a bed and have a rest. in other words, when you catch a cold, there is nothing you can do. The only thing you can do is, keep on having a good nite till it heals
use this one
2006-12-09 12:25:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Catching a cold is a painful experience. You might have a runny nose, severe coughs, and dizziness. Even worse, you may get a high fever and feel abnormal. My suggestion is, do away with working today and go to the doctor immediately. As soon as you get home, lie down and take a rest to ease that miserable feeling. In time, your cold will heal.
2006-12-09 12:27:45 · answer #9 · answered by chocolateflavadgurl 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
HERE IT IS WITH WHAT I BELIEVE IS CORRECT!
To catch a cold is a painful experience. You may find your self being dizzy, having a runny nose or coughing none stop. Even worse, you may get a fever and feel sour and pain all over your body. My suggestion is, put down your work and go to the doctor immediately! As soon as you got home, lie on a bed and get some rest. Anyhow, when you catch a cold, there is not much you can do. The only thing you can do is, wait until you get better from your cold.
2006-12-09 12:24:47 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 4⤋