This one is called hurt
I take it
I let him hit
I scream in pain
Eyes full of salt water rain
I'm so scared
I wish he cared
I pray with all my might
That i wont get hurt tonight
i have more but i only want to say this one b/c the others get more into my feelings ect ..
2006-12-09 11:28:23 · 12 answers · asked by linny !! 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
good stuff, but sometimes the best poems are the ones that are full of feeling now I'm curious about seeing the others.
2006-12-09 11:59:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem cuz because the rhymes are forced and there is nothing so poetical in this piece. Sorry.
2006-12-09 11:37:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a nice poem. i hope your not going through that
2006-12-09 11:30:29 · answer #3 · answered by ♡Miszzy_327♡ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I say dump him if he can cause you that much pain without caring he's not worth it anyway.
2006-12-09 12:20:46 · answer #4 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem hope your not baseing it on your life if so get out while you can
2006-12-09 12:35:16 · answer #5 · answered by deedee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is based on reality, then you need to seek refuge, NOW.
2006-12-09 13:17:08 · answer #6 · answered by Dr Know It All 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay, is this real? you have to let me know, if this does happen to you, you need to tell someone, you need to get out of the relationship!
2006-12-09 11:31:32 · answer #7 · answered by Juice 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this poem is meaningful and makes people think. i like it a lot but its kind of sad...
2006-12-09 11:30:37 · answer #8 · answered by t dawg 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, i dont really like poetry, but that was great.
2006-12-09 11:30:10 · answer #9 · answered by h103192 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So far so good.
2006-12-09 13:28:22 · answer #10 · answered by Deana S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋