I have been dreaming about you,
and suddenly here you are,
so close, but yet so far.
I feel your presence near me,
you totaly endear me.
you are my fallen star,
so close but yet so far.
A bridge has been formed
between our hearts,
bonded by love never to part.
For you I have left the door to
my heart ajar, we are so close
in love but in miles we are so far.
What do you think?
2006-12-09 02:53:53 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
simply beautiful.
2006-12-09 07:39:19 · answer #1 · answered by Lexy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked your poem it was almost like wrote it because your in love. Are you?I Write poems too, maybe I'll post one so you can read it some time.
2006-12-09 11:02:47 · answer #2 · answered by lovettetarnisha 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I reaally liked your poem....yo uahve similar style like me about writing. keep going like this...
don't los your faith... but jwrite all the time...trsut me something will come up.
take care.
2006-12-09 11:04:16 · answer #3 · answered by invisible1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love your poem!
but for such a sweat sounding guy, that avatar macks you look so tough
2006-12-09 18:46:25 · answer #4 · answered by rock_angel_kay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad!
You're a poet and hopefully now you know it :<).
2006-12-09 11:03:36 · answer #5 · answered by Gotta Know 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude you are good you should be a poet if you are nice job~!
2006-12-09 11:55:40 · answer #6 · answered by **POPULAR!** 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋