help please...........i need some really fast answers.......?

Question

read the following text and correct any mistakes please......i'm in a hurry .......


One day two people,Marry and Sam, desided to go on a picknick.They found a lovely spot near a forest.While marry was on the other side of the field doing something useful,Sam was just laying there on the ground .He was reading a book,an normally,he fell asleep.A few moments later a bear came along.His name was Yogi.He was either very hungry,or he didn't have anything better to do.Anyway,Yogi really made the whole place look alot different.He opened the basket Marry and Sam brought and created a real mess.Plates,bananas,hamburgers and glasses were averywhere.When he had enough,Yogi went home leaving the place in a state of total chaos.Fut first he found a way to blame Sam for his misdeeds.


please do not correct typos,only biiiigggg grammar mistakes.

Answer 1

One day two people, Marry and Sam, decided to go on a picnic.They found a lovely spot near a forest. While marry was on the other side of the field doing something useful, Sam was just laying there on the ground. He was reading a book, and he fell asleep. A few moments later a bear came along. His name was Yogi. He was either very hungry, or he didn't have anything better to do. Yogi really made the whole place look a lot different. He opened the basket Marry and Sam brought and created a real mess. Plates, bananas, hamburgers and glasses were everywhere. When he had enough, Yogi went home leaving the place in a state of total chaos, but first he found a way to blame Sam for his misdeeds.

Answer 2

One day two people, Marry and Sam, decided to go on a picnic. They found a lovely spot near a forest. While marry was on the other side of the field doing something useful, Sam was just laying there on the ground .He was reading a book, an normally, he fell asleep. A few moments later a bear came along. His name was Yogi. He was either very hungry, or he didn't have anything better to do. Anyway, Yogi really made the whole place look a lot different. He opened the basket Marry and Sam brought and created a real mess. Plates, bananas, hamburgers and glasses were everywhere. When he had enough, Yogi went home leaving the place in a state of total chaos. But first he found a way to blame Sam for his misdeeds.

Answer 3

One day Mary and Sam decided to go on a picnic at a lovely spot near a forest. While Mary was away, Sam was laying on the ground reading a book. He fell asleep and a bear named Yogi came along. Yogi opened the basket Mary and Sam brought and spilled everything all over the place.Yogi went home when he was done and left the place in a state of total chaos. But he first found a way to blame Sam for his misdeeds


** I tried to work w/ whatever u had there w/o altering big things, but I feel there's something missing in ur story, specially the last sentence!. But anyways, hope it works, and good luck

Answer 4

I see a dozen mistakes, you need to put space between all your words for one. Try using the Check Spelling button it will show you how many words you misspelled (quite a few I might add). You know, the more you read the more you learn how to spell and remember words. BTW Sam reading a book is being more useful than Mary because he is educating himself.

Answer 5

Yer storee iz base. Yoo nead help beeyon "only biiiigggg grammar mistakes." Yur spelling is atroeshus.

Yor teechure will start crieing and guzzluling whiskee two get over da pane that dis writin be goin to cauz. and end up licke dis teachure beeloe.

Answer 6

you cant get fast answers to this b.s.

go talk to your elementary english teacher cuz obviously you were eating the glue when he or she were teaching.

Answer 7

decided;picnic;Marry(Mary);there,on;and;banana's; everywhere;first,But first,he found;misdeeds!