Just wrote it tonight...
I call it a Blindingly Different World
What restless times we adhere to.
Yet for the moments well spent we emerge victorious.
Insane thoughts ramble and flow like a mighty river.
Water fall of incognizant and incoherent whispers.
To bring the ear hither closer to the ground.
Elaboration on a grand scale. Timelessly passing by.
Changed in its present state...
sure to burst on its own free will.
Yet to hamper back into it's fragile shell.
Escaped yet still remorseful not.
The hunter is seeked by the game.
The table turns upside down yet no one notices.
Is it only I.
Maybe. Just maybe. As my heart drops to the sky.
2006-12-08 14:09:22 · 9 answers · asked by ElDarado05 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
iff you want to see if i wrote it go to poetry.com and it should be under kenneth tabor which is me..
2006-12-08 14:15:47 · update #1
wow!!!!!! that is really good. I think it means in some point or another, your whole life will turn around. but i am not sure. but that is really good. WOW!! I mean I know I have said this, but you are a really good writer. I have read and wrote many poems, but this is deffinitly in top 3.
2006-12-08 14:15:33 · answer #1 · answered by ~I love my baby brother~ 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see the war,terrorism,congress,small victory's and losses,victims of war,I don't understand the last sentence (as my hart drops to the sky)I could understand if it said (as my hart drops from the sky)That would mean sadness for all the loss.
2006-12-08 14:26:47 · answer #2 · answered by dreamweaver021557 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is wonderful! It made me a sadness for the time that we lose and cant get back. I dont know if that is what it means, but that is how I felt.
2006-12-08 14:16:50 · answer #3 · answered by Shadow Dreamer. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked it. If it's yours, get the heck off Yahoo and get it out where it'll get published.
2006-12-08 14:23:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good. i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. i just don't know what it's about.
2006-12-08 14:14:33 · answer #5 · answered by Adèle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's kinda confusing but that's jst me
2006-12-08 14:15:29 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really good.im not sure if YOU wrote it though.but like i said,i like it.
2006-12-08 14:13:51 · answer #7 · answered by ♥BermudaShortzROCK♦ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's pretty good. 9!
2006-12-08 14:13:41 · answer #8 · answered by 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DaSh HelLa kLEan.......
2006-12-08 14:13:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋