insence of her fragrence, so sweet
deliciously tasted when our lips meet
i prayed and begged her to stay
instead she turned and ran away
her corpse withered into the air
but i still remember her angelic glare
2006-12-08 12:42:17 · 7 answers · asked by Lusted 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
she was an angry poor soul, thats why its also sad that i loved her
2006-12-08 12:55:16 · update #1
good poem
2006-12-08 12:43:34 · answer #1 · answered by MARKOS KRUGER 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry for your loss. I'm sorry for her anger. Your poem tells of your sincere love for her and loss without her. Words can be healing, keep expressing your thoughts and feelings in writing.
2006-12-08 21:02:36 · answer #2 · answered by professor grey 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems kinda Poe-esque
2006-12-08 20:43:54 · answer #3 · answered by Alibi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
dam thats hella good im a poem myself and i feel like crying
2006-12-08 20:50:39 · answer #4 · answered by teddy bear 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, Its very remorseful,and reminds me of Poe
and I'm sorry for your lost
2006-12-08 22:30:00 · answer #5 · answered by blondie79_dumb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats sweet and sad at the same time. Wouldn't it be great if we could see them again..wouldn't it be great if you could read that to her!
2006-12-08 20:44:14 · answer #6 · answered by justwonderingwhatever 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Almost, and please accept this suggestion.
I still remember her angelic stare.
Glare tends to invoke a "mean" look.
GOD bless
MBA-Boston Univ.
2006-12-08 20:46:09 · answer #7 · answered by May I help You? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋