Last time, I promise...
Please look one more time... http://www.storeburst.com
It's really hard coming up with website ideas, that don't suck. You almost have to do this full time, ie JOB!
Thanks for participating!
2006-12-08 11:56:59 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Computers & Internet ➔ Internet
your page look too plain, not attractive at all. It's like you done the site in a hurry to get people to do something. After you have accomplish what you want, your site disappear all in a sudden.
2006-12-08 12:02:17 · answer #1 · answered by 2feEThigh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kind of it does with the ads all over it and the cheap looking graphic. The main problem I see though is the grammar and spelling.
Take for example the sentence "I truly enjoyed the experience, as I now investment property . . . " This should be "as I now invest in property".
If you are really making that much money why do you need ads all over page?
2006-12-08 20:02:07 · answer #2 · answered by traciatim 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What are you selling????? There's no marketing flow at all. At first I thought this was one of those discontinued sites. Who is your target audience? Get rid of the Ad's!!!!
2006-12-08 20:11:37 · answer #3 · answered by Shawn H 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋