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"Above Her Shoulders"
The starry silhouette shining over her shoulders
. beseeches: Re-align to a harder view!
. Grand design always hearkens back to rue.
Tarry darkness, and damnable pin light smolders
. amidst hollow heat, lest to mine eyes: the beholders.
. So petty, none to fine, and all so few true
. feelings are felt when looking beyond her hue.
Reeling and falling, failing! Love hast grown colder.
So short a while, up on top. Such courtly smiles,
. coyly, could never stop. Oh! Whoa! Such trials!
Thou, expanse above, hast lain a burden upon my breast,
. revoking my dove’s ascent! Down to permanent rest!
Grief! No relief, I canst no longer hold her,
. with such resplendence up above her shoulders.
2006-12-08 11:49:32 · 3 answers · asked by Random 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
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2006-12-08 11:52:05 · update #1
this is really good. U must have experience writting poems
2006-12-08 11:54:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very deep! I love it! Wow!
2006-12-08 11:57:28 · answer #2 · answered by Urchin 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWSOME!!! U HAVE GOOD TALENT!!
2006-12-08 11:56:54 · answer #3 · answered by IHaveAQuestion. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋