we're invincible
we're unpredictable
we're unbreakable
no one can pull us apart
until the world falls apart
if we fell through it would be a living hell
without you
time is always on our side
i wish i could call you mine >>>>>>
it would help me a lot if you could give me your opinion on these lyrics..the song is written bout me....
2006-12-08 08:48:32 · 10 answers · asked by Sassyyy Cassyyy 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
well the last line is kind of weird because the beginning insinuates that you guys are together and then in the last lie you say you aren't....
otherwise, I like them a lot!
2006-12-08 08:54:53 · answer #1 · answered by dips5210 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Yeah, little more effort, use more elaborate words and symbolism.
Lyrics that simple and only have the meaning found at face value, while not necesarrily horrible, arent something I'd label as being GOOD.
2006-12-08 17:47:16 · answer #2 · answered by NecroPsyChroNauTron 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I think those lyirc S U C K. Sorry but true. You or whoever made it needs to work a little harder. Honestly, it sounds like it took them only 1 minute.
2006-12-08 16:55:22 · answer #3 · answered by Trevorman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like, I like yes I do.
It's sounding good!!!
It's a "love" song Im assuming and yes looks like its coming along good!
2006-12-08 16:53:37 · answer #4 · answered by Genna 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like them!
2006-12-08 16:53:00 · answer #5 · answered by COOL♥ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretty good, you;re on da right track :)
keet it up
2006-12-08 16:55:09 · answer #6 · answered by Paula 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's great!It would be perfect for a ballad.Very poetic....Bravo!
2006-12-08 16:53:22 · answer #7 · answered by Johnny 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds good so far keep writing good luck
2006-12-08 16:51:44 · answer #8 · answered by Stephanie 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's kwestionable.....no its not its just stupid and gay!
2006-12-08 16:53:41 · answer #9 · answered by ClAiR BeAr! 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋